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• Deadlines

  (#) easykeys 2008-10-13

  I absoloutley LOVED this chapter!!
  
  The interaction between Bob and Jill just makes me smile sooooo much. I love them! It's sad that Jill is going home soon though =(
  
  Frank is such a tease but I love it, he always lightens the mood.
  
  More soon pretty please?
  
  dondon xo.

  Author's response

  I'm so relieved you liked it, i was a bit iffy about this one. I didn't mean for it to be such a long update. Hope you like the next update which i'm hoping to post soon.

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-10-13

  I agree with Dondon, i loveu this chapter so much and i can't wait to find out what happens next. I love the way they are both so confused about what's happening between them but when they get together they can't resist each other.
  
  I loved the angry Ray, i couldn't stop laughing picturing the look on their faces.
  
  Plus, the bit with Gerard saying he wouldn't fall in love quickly - ha ha
  
  I have to also say the way you write about Mikey is so lovely, you just want to hug him.
  
  Thank you so much

  Author's response

  Thanks Moonpig, i love reading reviews because you post something thinking it's a bit rubbish but people tell you they really enjoyed it so it gives me confidence when i'm writing.
  
  I love Ray, i can just imagine him getting frustrated especially with Bob who's usually always on time.
  
  I'm so pleased you like the way i write Mikey.

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-10-13

  YES!
  
  I am so happy that Jill and Bob are finally interacting in the open with each other and showing their true feelings. Bob better tell her how he feels before she leaves.
  
  and I loved Frank playing cupid. he he.
  
  and I agree with moonpig, I love the way you write Mikey.
  
  great job, as always.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i just need to get a bit more confidence in my writing but the fab reviews keep me going.
  
  There will be alot more of the relationship between Gerard and Eliza.
  
  I haven't really decided if the story will jump forward, i can't say too much at the mo as the next couple of chapters are kinda a turning point for them both.
  
  It's really hard sticking to real events as i have to do loads of checking up on the net to make sure i have them in the right place at the right time and i've messed up having them go home as i think they went straight on to Europe after the UK. WHOOPS :)
  
  Ray is ace and is like the Dad of the group, well in my story anyway. I love writing Frank, he just makes me laugh when i think of him.
  
  I do have a idea for a future side story with Mikey, i should maybe start thinking about how i'm going to end this one because it could go on for ages lol.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-10-13

  OMFG....I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!....MORE!
  
  I loved frankie teasing them all the time....
  
  it's so fucking funny!
  
  Your an amazing writter!

  Author's response

  Wow thank you for the compliment. Love the fact i make you laugh.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-13

  You are silly! i really enjoyed this update.
  
  i felt sad for Gerard when he kinda realised he so hadn't found the one!
  
  Bob and Jlll are real life aren't they. Doubts, worry, concerns. I am happy they are Ok with everything but I am worried how soon they are gonna see each other?? Are you gonna have a jump to March 2007 when they come back to the UK or is Jill gonna go visiting them??
  
  I love how you keep to real time and real events in that sense.
  
  Anyway, Ray getting mad was totally how I see him, such a sweetie but very professional! And Frankie playing cupid! Well he is an angel!
  
  And I am glad Jill is still keeping an eye on Mikey, bless him!
  
  Thanks so much and more soon!!
  
  

  Author's response

  Hello, thank you so much for reviewing and i'm so pleased you are still enjoying the story. It means alot.
  
  I really enjoy writing the relationship between Bob and Jill and then having the other guys interacting with them.
  
  I really hope you like what happens next.

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-13

  Hi there Neve,
  
  These two are just the cutest.
  
  LOL to Frank for playing cupid and talking both Bob and Jill into a one a.m. walk.
  
  And congrats to Jill for finally being a little more open about them.
  
  Loved the whole pre-show scene. Bob and Jill being caught, Ray getting angry but in the end he gave a smile so he really wasn't as angry as it seemed he just had a reputation to uphold!!
  
  LOL!!
  
  God bless Gerard he'll soon find the love of his life.
  
  What can I say I just loved the whole thing!!
  
  I can't wait to read more!!

  Author's response

  I'm so glad you liked it and it made you laugh - hurrah.
  Frank is just so good and always looking out for everyone else. I love writing him.
  
  Jill was kind of all over the place in this one as she really likes Bob but has major reservations.So pleased you liked the pre-show incident - ahh poor Jill.

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-10-14

  Hahahhahahah
  It was so awesome!!!
  I feel sorry for them hahahhaaha
  Update soonxx

  Author's response

  LOL, thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it and i just hope you like the next one.

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