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• Potter's Surprise

  (#) jabarber69 2008-11-29

  Hey you stated that this was finished!?! As I understand that you dont want to write all 7 years of hogwarts, still you could continue this, have them do things totally different, forget canon, like you have been doing and make up your own story...continue the dance lessons for both of them and also let them take martial arts classess during the year...forget the sorcer stone, chamber...let them both get really strong, knowledgable, and powerful and then take out voldie say in 4th yr while maybe also having sex to finalize there bond...hell just continue doing what you are doing it is outstanding, but like I'm been trying to say, continue with the AU.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) juanjoseso 2009-01-27

  good chapter

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) ILikeToRead 2009-03-08

  A very good story to a good story. Thanks for sharing your work.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) jay21317 2009-05-05

  not my fave ship but i still say you should continue it do all seven years its well written only problem i have is one word you keep miss spelling its wave there is no i in waved

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) koppe 2009-07-14

  Great story. Good and realistic portrail of the Grangers' initial reaction. Great way of having them both know "more" when they have to.
  
  I very much hope you'll continue with this story... or perhaps write more stories set in the same universe. I would like to know more of the reactions of professors and students -- especially Dumbledore... The reaction of the Wiz-world when it becomes known (will Lucius try something?)... Who is Hermione's grand-aunt... What will happen to the Durselys...? I also hope that Harry and Hermione -- either themselves or their older selves -- will be unable to wait very long.
  
  Alternatively, a similar story.
  
  Keep up the great work (I've also read several of your other stories with great joy).
  

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) grenouille 2009-08-13

  You think this is finished... why? Uh-huh, no way, you've just started LOL Seriously, this is different enough to continue. Just let yourself go completely off the deep end. They already have all the answers, so let them "have at" already. Well done.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) Theo 2009-11-19

  I can understand not wanting to take it through all 7 years, but what you did was leave it off in the middle of your thoughts.
  
  Maybe what you could do is have a chapter detailing about custody and the rest of the year, one detailing the 2nd and 3rd year, and one telling about the tournament and ending the story at the graveyard as Harry/Hermione have the information on how to beat Riddle.
  
  But as it is how you left it, it it an incomplete story.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) Celexs 2010-04-19

  I enjoy time travel stories, i like the plot of them even if they are over used cliches. If you ever continue this i look forward to reading it.
  
  Cel

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) selonianth 2010-08-29

  I do quite like this story Scruff and would quite like it if it was continued.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) starboy454 2011-01-11

  i hope you are going to finish this story by in by all of your story

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