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• Potter's Surprise

  (#) TheResident 2011-04-28

  You list this story as complete yet you end chapter 2 with a lead to another chapter. I really hope you can continue this story. I find it a nice change from others I've read.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) LadyElena18 2011-07-31

  love it so far! do u plan to write more to it!

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) bob26 2012-02-09

  I do love these type of H/Hr stories and this is one of the better ones love all of your stories so for more please

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) GBTtown 2013-07-03

  I see the point of your response (whatever year it was written)about making it more interesting. It is a good story but the similar stories have been written. The tutor is a new twist as are the dance and martial arts lessons. But they have been done by you and others. You have other stories unfinished that ARE original and have great possibilities, IF you are still writing.
  As far as I can tell you are not even responding to reviews. It is real loss for those of us who have become your readers.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) HoosierPotter 2013-08-23

  I would love to see you do more with this. I mean you don't have to do the full seven years but hitting on the major points with them in this type of go would really work. I think having the older version in their head helping them along the way is awesome and a very good idea. The fact Hermione Sr. was there was awesome and it really was a treat for Harry Sr. Again I would love to see more of this and if you had to break it up in seven different parts.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) Genisis_Prime 2014-03-15

  I really hope you pick this back up... I beleave that this is a really good story and want to know where it is going, true there have been many time travel stories written but i find the variety and complexity refreshing and with the similarities I find that i enjoy the differences (however subtle) that much more, Thank you for your writing and i hope to read more of it as I find it.
  
  -Genisis

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) Kairan1979 2014-07-15

  The story doesn't look 'Complete'.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) GBTtown 2016-06-21

  Another one of your stories with great potential that never got completed.

• Potter's Surprise

  (#) EdTheBeast 2019-07-01

  Great story, wish you continued!

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