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• The Face in the Pool

  (#) ROgue1615 2008-12-17

  A very good start. I have not seen this angle used before, it should be very interesting. Hopefully I am reading this right and it will be a Hermione/Harry. Always did like those better.
  
  Reactions should be.. Interesting.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) DavidMPotter 2008-12-17

  Brilliant! I loved this story. I am so looking forward to coming chapters.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) ChrisLeBron 2008-12-17

  Excellent chapter, and very good story so far. I shall watch this with great interest.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) greywizard 2008-12-17

  Just found this because of a recommendation by Red Jackson on some Yahoo groups and I have to say it's good to see more of your stories.
  
  Looking forward to seeing more of this - hopefully soon.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) nfosurfer 2008-12-17

  Very good to see you back Doc. I certainly enjoy your writing. Always interesting to see where you are going with a story.
  Thanks,
  Rick

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-12-17

  It's a great start, but I hope you explain a bit more of Harry's intervening nineteen years during which he learned how to disembowel multiple Death Eaters.
  
  I really liked the separate introspective scenes, and I think you used them well to separate Harry's friends into what they really are. It seems pretty clear that Ron's jealousy is going to play a sizable role in the story, which is always fun when I know in advance that he won't get whatever he wants. Or at least I strongly suspect.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) ladysavay 2008-12-17

  You have a very good beginning here. Keep it up. I'm anxious to see what happens next and where you take it, most especially how to have Harry avoid the 'obvious' assumptions that Harry is going dark that Dumbledore will make and what Harry's plans are. Who will he tell if anyone?
  
  More, soon!

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-17

  Glad to have found this today, as you write some tremendous AU's imo, and you caught the six of them very well, Ron is more concerned with his immediate desires, Ginny was crushing on the BWL, and Luna is patient, Neville is willing to help, and Hermione, well, she's the Hermione Jane from fifth year and before, and she's going to do all she can because she loves Harry, enough to leave her parents, enough to defy Umbridge, enough to have feelings deeper that she'd ever have for Ron, imo.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) mwinter 2008-12-17

  Finally another story by Dr. T. All the crowds go wild and await for the next chapter in this saga. (well we hope a saga anyway)

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Alatoic01 2008-12-17

  quite good beginning, cant wait to read the explanation Harry will have with his friends and Dumbledore.
  
  Nice way to express the thoughts of the five, specially that Ron accept that he is not to deep in is thinking and not so good as a friend as he could. Love that Hermione went to search Harry to get some answers and specially to talk and be sure he is ok.
  
  Hope to read more soon.
  
  cheers.
  
  MAC

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