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• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Prince_Charon 2008-12-17

  Welcome back!
  
  Very good, interesting start.
  
  More soon, please.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Clell65619 2008-12-17

  - The Doctor's Back, The Doctor's Back, The Doctor's Back!
  
  - Yea!
  
  - Good good start, one of your usual quality. Looking forward to the rest of it.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Bobboky 2008-12-17

  very very cool, I like how you had the sealed room play out and the introspection of Harry's friends at the end.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) reader3 2008-12-17

  Unique story.
  
  Will the trapped person just watch or feature more into the story? Also are they Nimune, who was trapped by Merlin or an older spirit who Merlin visited?
  
  Hope to see more soon.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Wolfric 2008-12-17

  Great story. I like stories where Harry makes smart choices. Super Harry is good too. Thanks for writing. W.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) draghknar2003 2008-12-17

  excellent start, looking forward to more of this.
  
  yeah, ron should have never been more than a main for the first 2 books really, and started to be "weeded" out by the 3rd. o well.
  
  i also like the fatc that you have decided to make ginny scared rather than either jealous or over infatuated with harry, thanks.
  

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Vanir 2008-12-17

  Intriguing. I enjoyed the semi-maturing Ron, the eternally predictable Hermione, Luna the ...Luna and the Eternal Fangirl. While i don't mind some Ginny-bashing, i did enjoy that you made some effort into making her real. She's a little kid. How could she be anything but childish? Neville is very easy to make likeable so i won't shovel sunshine at you about him just yet. I'm looking forward to see the backlash. It's going to be bad, right? Right? Oh, i guess i'll just wait around 'til you tell me.
  Thanks.
  Vanir

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) SomeGuyFawkes 2008-12-17

  Awesome story! Arse-kicking Harry always hits the spot. :)
  
  The "God in the Pool" is easily glossed over, too, due to Harry's completely in-character lack of appropriate curiosity. (A neat mechanism. ;-) )
  

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) mathiasgranger 2008-12-17

  Good start you have here Dr. T.
  
  Thanks for writing,
  Matt

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) snape504 2008-12-17

  I loved what you did to Bella! Fantastic!I'm hoping for the pairing to be Hermione - Harry. Hermione and Ron argue too much to be paired together. I love Harry being dominant and forceful. More, please.
  Debby

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