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• The Face in the Pool

  (#) DrT 2008-12-18

  Oh, and no, we will not find out anything about the entity in the pool, except it likes messing with folks, alternating between doing good and causing trouble. . . .

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) sparky40sw 2008-12-18

  I was so happy to see the link posted by Red Jacobsen in the CaerAzkaban yahoo group messages, I had missed reading your wonderful and thought provoking stories.
  
  I like the setup here, the alternate future, and the explicit choice of a better one. The self separation of the weak links in the group is wonderful, particularly juxtaposed with re-dedication and resolve on the other three's side.
  I am looking forward to seeing the development of a supportive and loving relationship between Harry and the 2 who cose to go and see what HE needed.
  
  thanks for sharing
  Ken

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Cateagle 2008-12-18

  Oh, and no, we will not find out anything about the entity in the pool, except it likes messing with folks, alternating between doing good and causing trouble. . . .
  
  Y'know, that entity would have fun communing with Sirius' spirit, where ever it is and the results would likely be most interesting and colorful.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) TimeMage 2008-12-18

  What a great start! Welcome back!
  
  Harry/Hermione/Luna eh? GOOD!
  
  Cant wait for more!

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) dellaran 2008-12-18

  Off to an interesting start! I'm glad to see that you're working on something new.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) rtc5873 2008-12-18

  Happy to see you are back. Very exciting start. And as always, original.
  John

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) zaxxon 2008-12-18

  Let me add that I enjoy your return as well. Also would like to see more of "When Vernon Didn't Miss".
  
  I do look forward to seeing more of this Harry. I haven't read HBP and DH become of how Harry "turned" out. I was hoping that HBP would have explained that Harry was greatly affected by Voldemort in OotP, yet still did the best he could.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) BJH 2008-12-18

  Hmm, only three chapters? And you are setting it up for a H/Hr/L grouping, it seems. Or does one win out over the other?
  
  As usual with your work, I can't wait for the next chapter
  
  BJH
  

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) twilliams1797 2008-12-18

  finally, the story I wanted to write, if I had the talent.
  do carry on good sir.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) silverleafhp 2008-12-18

  Would it be wrong of me to hope this ends up in a ship other than Hermione or Luna?
  
  Although, those are two of my favorite ships, I find myself wanting to read a good Harry/Daphne, Harry/Padma, or Harry/Su Li story.
  
  Of course if it ends up Harry/Hermione or Harry/Luna, I will of course still read it because like I said I really do like those ships. Just wouldn't mind seeing something different.
  
  Otherwise great start to the story. Although I am not sure, but it looked like you posted that was only going to be a three chapter one? not sure about that, but I truthfully hope it is a little longer.
  
  

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