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• The Face in the Pool

  (#) petunia_uphill 2008-12-18

  It's great to see you are back, DrT! This seems to be one of your unique plot lines, too. I love all your stories, and this fits right in!

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Ame_Suisei 2008-12-18

  Very interesting.. lots of potential as well.
  I hope to see this continued.
  By the way.. +5 to all good ranks since they were already maxed out.. :-p

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) brad 2008-12-18

  Good to see you back! And with an early Chistmas present for us! :-) I hope life has been treating you well.
  
  I liked this method of reducing the epilogue to vapor, giving us 'our' Harry's response to what he saw. Marrying Ginny and Albus Severus, hee! :-) This is clearly the Harry of book 5, before the chest monster struck.
  
  I kept thinking throughout the first part that Harry would express some gratitude to the pool entity, ask if it wanted freedom, et cetera. Still, I'm glad he 'bowed solemnly' and said 'thank you', rather than be quite the self-centred lad who accepted everyone's help - including Hermione's labours - in the last book with little appreciation.
  
  Harry's rapid take-down of the DEs and Voldemort was a bit too sudden for me, but I guess this short story is going to be more about the relationships of the Six? Certainly that's what I'm most interested in, and you finished the chapter holding that in mind. Luna's watching and waiting was interesting. Ginny's fear makes perfect sense; she is the youngest. Hermione's knowing how Harry was thinking - and her desire to 'track him down' - was exactly in accordance with her canon character. Pre-HBP, that is.
  
  Thank you for the new story! I do enjoy your work.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) thenewestmarauder 2008-12-18

  I'm likin the story...though I do think you can do a bit better job with the dueling...standing and tossin spells no matter how powerful a person is kinda iffy to me...otherwise keep up the good work!!!

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Jimm 2008-12-18

  It's great to see a new story from you. Thanks for sharing it with us.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) cloneserpents 2008-12-18

  Should to interesting to see where it goes from here.
  
  Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)
  

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) foxs_revenge 2008-12-19

  MORE!!!! Please? Pretty please????
  
  Seriously, Very interesting pod. So he knows everything up to where book 7 left off? That will certainly make things highly entertaining. Can't wait for more.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) gruvertd 2008-12-19

  Good start. Looking forward to the rest.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) firelord 2008-12-19

  fantastic i hope you update a.s.a.l.a.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) jsdailey 2008-12-19

  Great to see you back, T.
  
  It seems that your hiatus has done you some good. I'm very excited to see how this turns out!
  
  JD

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