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A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
17 reviewsSociopathic Gerard Way ends up on death row. Here, you're dead before they even pierce that first needle into your skin. This is it; this is hell.
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A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-03
Heh. Twisted. Really well done, imho though. Not everyone can write shit like this (I myself, am one of those people that can, so I feel like I can talk about it with authority or some strange thing). Loved the little bits of sick humor thrown in there - really makes for great insight into the mindset of the character. You've set up a nice original story line here ("What they do to guys like us ..." I can see might have been the spark, but you took the scissors and ran with them here) so it will be interesting to see where you take it.Author's response
Aw, man...I'm just gonna tell you this: don't expect too much. Thanks for reading.A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-04
Either way, I think you're a very good writer =DAuthor's response
Well then, thank you =] I'm very glad you think so. I'm gonna try to write more, but I'm just waiting for the right inspiration to strike because...well, it would be disappointing if the second chapter was all bland you know?A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) Truest-Blackout 2009-01-04
Very good. The sick humor in it gave good insight into the mind of Gerard. I think I like where this is going.Author's response
Thank you very much =]A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) wheresyourheart 2009-01-04
oh man, this was amazing. I enjoyed this way too much...Author's response
Good to know. Very good to know =]A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) figilio_vampiri 2009-01-09
I am a sucker for your writing. It's so appealing! Sick humour like that, and characters like this Gerard intrigue me so much, it's a little odd. But I'm the type who'll read books of serial killers for pleasure. Some more of this would be amazing actually, even if you don't think much could come of it, I think you have the potential to take it far!Author's response
Thank you so much for reading my stuff, i could smother you, but I dunno, I'm still trying to find the approrpriate beginning for the next chapter...A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) SuzSpence 2009-01-10
Yay! You're finally writing more stuff again! Your writing friggen /owns/, seriously. and here I was thinking you'd given in writing altogether!
You have to update.
Or I will run you over with a lawnmower haha. Nah I'm kidding.Author's response
Lol, danke sie. Like I said, I will write as soon as I decide where to start...A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2009-01-17
Fuck.Me.Oh.My.God.
That was so fucking dark and twisted. Honestly, it made me shiver a little. How could Gerard be so...evil. And cold. And disturbed. How did you make him so cold, evil and disturbed? That is some talent there. I really liked it. Continue? Please? Wow.
-Emily xo.Author's response
Hi, thnak youu =] Yeah, it's not really talent, it's just random jitters of inspiration. And then it's gone and I'm stuck with one awesome chapter and the other ones are just...ew. I know this story is interesting and it's too open-ended if I leave it at this, but um...I dunno, maybe I'll have to. I'd rather have readers wonder what's gonna happen next than you know, like getting bored by the end of the next chapter.
Anyway, ily, you read like all my stories =] Write more of yours.
-CryssieA Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-01-27
I swear by every curly, dark hair growing between my legs...wow man, that was HILARIOUS!
I really like this one..although i think its a good one-shot..just cos of the ending, hehe...hm, i wonder if it was Eliza he killed...day dreams
lol just kidding! im not THAT mean..oh hey uh..would you like to be in one of my stories?
REVENGEAuthor's response
Heh, Lindsey, I expected. But Eliza? I didn't even think of that. And thanks to you, I've decided to leave this as a one shot. =]
And um...depends. What kinda story is it?A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) TrunkOfAmmunition 2009-02-11
hey, i really like this one!
great stuff (y)A Mirror Becomes a Razor When It's Broken
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-03-02
Dude ... you really have to continue on this one!
xDAuthor's response
Man, you know, I'd love to, but I just don't wanna write the next chapter and have it turn out to be total crap!
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