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Push- Chapter 6 up
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-03-14
FUCK YEAH!!!! Me and gee kiss!!! Whoop!!!! Bob and Ray were betting AGAIN funny!! Great update!!!Push- Chapter 6 up
(#) izziebella 2009-03-14
Okay, this might be a little out of order, just a warning.
Haha, Ray and Bob were betting again lol.
/”Nicole drops her hand from his face, complete love in her eyes. Gerard stares back, then lifts his bloody hand from his side and putting it in her hair. He clutches her to him, and kisses her./”
So, I’m guessing that they’re an item now? Aww…It’s so sweet that Gerard stood up for her when Kevin was talking about Nicole…They are so in love! It’s really sweet. But, okay I have to ask this, and don’t hate me for this please :) When he put his bloody hand in her hair, does she have bloody hair now? I’m sorry I just had to ask, I couldn’t help my self :)
”And Frankie. Wonderful, amazing Frankie.”
It’s pretty obvious that Evangeline has a crush on Frankie! But does he feel the same way about her? He better…They would make the greatest couple ever.
I think it’s great that she’s finally has some people that care for her. I really hope that they’ll help her out with what she’s going through, because that’s pretty tough. I’m looking forward to reading about that conversation. ..
You did an amazing job describing all of the characters personalities and hinting that there might be something going on with Gerard that’s making him so withdrawn and reserved. That’s really interesting actually…I’m thinking that maybe him and Evangeline have more in common than they think…Maybe they’re going to help each other out?
I have to say that one of my favorite parts was when Mikey had an asthma attack and she had to get his inhaler for him… and then help him out and help him get up. Wow, I really don’t think that I could have done that, I prolly would have had a panic attack or something like that, and then you would see two people not being able to breathe in the hallway lol...so anyways...You wrote that out very well, you’re really good at writing really good imagery.
I rated your story too by the way :)
I can’t wait for the next update!
Xo-Izzzibee
Push- Chapter 6 up
(#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-03-14
Thanks again for the long reviews. It really does make my day. It's actually funny, I write competitvely and I had a competition today where I wrote for two hours straight, and on the way home, I told my dad I wanted to go home and write.
To answer your stuff Izzibee; 1- Yes, Gerard and Nicole are an item. They make a cool couple, but whether or not they stay together...
I think Frank and Evangeline would be sweet together too..-just wait for the next chapter, for Frank and Evangeline, and for "What she's going through"
Thanks for the rating. Next chapter is going to be really intense. Can't wait for you to read it. I'll post it the moment I finish.Push- Chapter 6 up
(#) izziebella 2009-03-14
Ah! I'm like, really phyched for the next chapter now. haha, I totally get what you mean about writing, I love it too, only I'm not that good at it, lol. And hey, thanks for responding, a lot of authors don't do that. :)
Can't wait to read the next chap.
Xo-Izzzibee.Push- Chapter 6 up
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-03-14
Ahhhh whether we stay together, missy you won't get any more of my chapters! You'll die not knowing what i do with you and Gee mwahahahahaha!!! (or you and Johnny it just depends)Push- Chapter 6 up
(#) disturbedangel6 2009-03-15
Lol
This is great
And it was so sweet with gerard and nicole was it? Haha
It was just so cute yay
Update soonxx
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