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Achieving Clarity
36 reviewsLuna discovers a way to help Harry Potter defeat Voldemort and takes the initiative
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Achieving Clarity
(#) Ryudo3 2009-04-01
Loved it. I do love the Hermione/Luna/Harry pairing. It really is two braining chicks plus harry. Hope to see a update soon.Author's response
Thanx, new update this week.
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(#) Ryudo3 2009-04-01
Loved it. I do love the Hermione/Luna/Harry pairing. It really is two braining chicks plus harry. Hope to see a update soon.Achieving Clarity
(#) Ikslemot 2009-04-01
Continue this fic please
H/Hr/L is one of my favourites so i'll be watching out for updates.Author's response
Thanx,
I'll try to update weekly, and hopefully, not weakly.
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(#) jabarber69 2009-04-01
that is so hot! I love harry/hermione/luna ships they if written right can be so damn good...!Author's response
Thanx,
I'll do my best.
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(#) thapagan 2009-04-02
I think you have a great thing going here, you could tell this story in flashback form while at "luna's talks"
maybe even have thingd work out so that wrong doer's are punished.
Or not it is your story and I look forward to reading more.Author's response
Thanx,
This will be more-or-less linear. I've outlined the story so it has a definate beginning, middle and end. Of course, my stories have a way of taking on lives of their own!
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(#) Wonderbee31 2009-04-02
Most excellent part here, and really liked the way that Luna started out here, and I think you've caught her at her most awesomness imo, the Luna we got more than a few glimpses of in canon, but who dissappeared in the end to marry someone, and to see a Hermione who's finally starting to do more than settle for the runner up. Go Hermione and Luna.Author's response
Thanx,
IMHO, this is, in large part, why we read and write fan ficiton - so we can see the stories as they could have been.
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(#) GryffindorDragon 2009-04-03
Nice start. It will be interesting to see how they change the world. And if Padma is willing, why not let her join in :).Author's response
If Padma is patient, she may, perhaps, eventually participate.
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(#) alec_potter 2009-04-04
Well...if only you had added Padma too....well if Harry and u can't i can be greedy and hope for more... :)
Great chapter/fic....keep writing.Author's response
Thanx,
Yep, brainy chicks rule!
And if everyone is willing to share, I'm okay with having Padma join the 'family'.
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(#) Brian64 2009-04-04
[taps on the window] Er, howdy.. just passing & wondered how chapter 2 was going.. :D
Author's response
Patience, grasshopper.
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(#) DarQuing 2009-04-05
I always figured that Luna was either a Seer, or she was exceptionally observant, maybe even Sherlock observant. :)
Please update soon! :)Author's response
Thanx for noticing. I've modeled my version of Luna on equal parts Sherlock Holmes and Hari Seldon.
Next chapter will be up soon.
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