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Achieving Clarity
36 reviewsLuna discovers a way to help Harry Potter defeat Voldemort and takes the initiative
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Achieving Clarity
(#) lycus 2009-04-06
you already have the makings of another great story after only one chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Especally ron's reaction to the new three or potentally four way couple.Achieving Clarity
(#) Cateagle 2009-04-07
-snicker- Oh, this is going to get interesting as each of them helps balance the other two and I rather suspect the combination of all three will be rather more powerful than the total of each of them separately. It should be "educational" to see just what world(s) the Lovegoods have in mind to move. BTW, I loved that throwaway bit of Luna's, "still your moon maiden - so far". Those of use whose memories reach back to the 1960s remember another Moon Maiden and the detective she got involved with.Author's response
Thanx,
It's refreshing to see someone else who recognizes the advantages to having such different world views in a relationship.
Now I've got the hard part, keeping it fresh and interesting.
Wish me luck!
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(#) siledubhghlase 2009-05-15
I must admit that I've fought reading this story for several weeks. Finally, I gave in to my curiosity and opened it. I'm glad I did! This is wonderful!
However, I'm a Ron fan. I love him to pieces. He's a big lovable galoot with foot-in-mouth disease. It hurts me when he's bashed, but I get over it if the story's good. So far, this one is, so...I'll get over it.
I'm also a Harry/Ginny shipper, but that doesn't mean I don't appreciate Harry/Hermione ships. Again, anything well-written works for me, except Slash--Harry is not gay. I've tried to read and appreciate it, but I just can't. Never mind.
I like where this appears to be going, though. Luna is the glue that'll hold this trio together. I've always suspected she is a Seer of sorts. Harry needs Hermione's logic and Luna's ability to suss out the possibilities to stay safe.
That said, it sounds like Dumbledore is filling the manipulative old fart role. Until I began reading fan fic, I never thought about it, but he really was manipulative. The evidence is certainly there in each of the books. Thank goodness for Luna. Hermione's already learning that not all authority figures are infallible.
Good job. I shall read on!Author's response
Thank you for taking a chance, I know I've read some stories that made me want to hurl.
I personally am not a big fan of Ron, you may want to skip the next chapter, cause he screws up big time and has a [/really/} bad day.
Sorry.
Hopefully he'll have a hero moment in the final battle.
We can only hope.Achieving Clarity
(#) Dragen 2009-06-13
Great start mate, I like that Luna has planned something out, great work. I like that Harry took Harry to the party. :D Oh I like that Luna can find Harry when she wants. I like that Luna knew Dumbledore is dying. I like how Harry and Hermione reacted on what Luna told her that she can see probabilities. Hope you add Padma and her sister.Author's response
Thanx for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope you enjoy the pairing (grouping) that works out in the end!
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(#) selenepotter 2009-06-29
finally got around to reading this . . . Great first chapter!
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