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Resolving Relationships
20 reviewsWho went with whom to the Yule Ball? Observations are made concerning Ron. Luna has a very good birthday. What is Draco up to?
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Achieving Clarity
(#) BenRG 2009-04-08
Things are progressing fast but not too fast, I suppose.
I like how you portray Luna here. She isn't a charactature like she is in so many works. If I have a problem with how you portray Hermione it is that she is a bit forward for a middle-class girl. You might want to mention some influence that has made her so quick moving - are her parents very overtly romantic? Is she a romance novel fan?
I'm looking forward to paedo!Draco getting a beating-down and maybe the aftershocks consuming Snape too.Author's response
Thanx for reading and reviewing.
The one point I'm trying to make here is that Harry and Hermione have been in love for years, it took the catalyst that is Luna to help them see it.
Luna, likewise, sees endless probabilities and in nearly all of them, she loves both Harry and Hermione.
That's one of the points they become clear on very early in thier relationship.
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P.S.
Paedo Draco isn't. It's like canon in which the 'firsties' are Crabbe and Goyle enjoying adventures in polyjuice.Achieving Clarity
(#) Cateagle 2009-04-08
I like!! I don't think it's too fast as I don't remember it taking that long with my lady, many a year ago. I do agree with the comment about when the two of them agree, and Harry is far from stupid or foolish. I rather suspect it's going to rather suck to be Ginny and/or Ron as they find out that their closeness to Harry has now been severely restricted and they can't do a thing about it. Depending on how you characterize Molly and Dumbles, this could provoke some interesting events; I'm rather certain that Albus is not going to appreciate two quite brilliant, even if in different ways, witches being firmly supportive of, and bound to, Harry. His dealing, or attempting to deal with this should prove "enlightening" about him.Author's response
Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Now that you mention it, my whirlwind romance seems to have taken root. Mrs. PerfesserN and I have been married for a while now. . .
In this story, Ginny and Ron are tertiary characters, having little or now effect on the outcomes.
Dumbles and Snape, likewise, are marginalized. Snape is still a slimy git, but he won’t suffer the same fate as canon Snape.
Dumbledore, is, of course, living on borrowed time, and, as such, is a bit distracted in this tale.
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(#) pettybureaucrat 2009-04-08
this is coming along nicely. it's sexy and enticing without being smutty. at least, not yet. I hope they get an excuse to hex Draco black and blue.Author's response
Thanx for reading and reviewing. Warning, smut occurs in later chapters. And Draco will have a very bad time in due course.
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(#) DavidMPotter 2009-04-09
What a wonderful story! I so look forward to more. How often will you update?Author's response
Thanx, glad you like it.
I update weekly.
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(#) issabissa 2009-04-10
An intriguing story. You are doing a good job with it, however I would suggest you watch your pacing a little. other then that you are doing a great job!Author's response
Thanx.
Paciing will be a bit of a balancing act, as the story started out as a simple one-shot, then grew into the bunny that won't leave me alone.
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(#) tpolich 2009-04-10
I love H/Hr/LL and this is a great start to one. I agree with the comment someone made above, it's a bit early for "I love yous". Other then that great story so far, I hope we get to see more soon.Author's response
Thanx,
I agree, that if Hermione and Harry and Luna, for that matter, had only just met and hadn't faced death together then it would be too early for 'I love you', but, Harry and Hermione have known each other for the better part of six years, and have been in love without knowing it. Luna catalyzed the relationship, letting them see just how right they are together.
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(#) CoyoteScion 2009-04-12
Oh I very much like this. Luna and Hermione plus maybe Padma later on? that's a fine fine arrangement, and of course enjoying the arrangement of words that have led to thatAchieving Clarity
(#) CoyoteScion 2009-04-12
Oh and please continue thisAuthor's response
Thanx, Coyote, I'll do my best.
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(#) Dragen 2009-06-13
Great chapter mate... keep up the great work.Author's response
Thanx mate,
I'll do my best!
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(#) selenepotter 2009-06-29
When Crab and Goyle were, polyjuiced, did they do any exploring of 'their' bodies? Eeeewwww!
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