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Forbidden
(#) MCArmyWife 2009-06-04
Okay first off I have loved this story from the beginning. Wow, what a long and exciting ride it's been. I'm glad the truth came out about Gee and Lynn. But..and this is just my opinion what Chey has done with Frank makes her just as bad as Gee. Hell, she was messing with Frank before she found out Gee slept with Lynn so she can't even use that as an excuse for her actions. Bad Frank for cheating on your wife. What a tangled web this is. Maybe Chey and Gee deserve each other at this point. I used to think she deserved someone better but not anymore. I can't wait for the new story. Hurry up, woman. I have to know what happenes to everyone.Author's response
Your opinion is very valid as always. And yes I agree with you, Cheyenne is just a bad a Gee but in her defence she did try to stop herself with Frank where Gerard didn't really try and stop with Lyn. Still not excuseable and maybe they do deserve each other.
New story on the way sooner then you think
Reign xxForbidden
(#) URAFever22 2009-06-04
Holy flannel shirt! Reign you did not dissapoint. I have to say I didn't think I would like this story in the beggining... I'm not even a my chemical romance fan... But I am a fan of good writing. I really can't stand your typical fan girl meets lead singer and they fall in love fic's. Truly annoying. But this was hilarious and had great drama. Not too overly dramatic which I appreaciated. I never liked Gerard and Chey together and I hope they never get back... honestly. Chey and Frank on the other hand I like. I know Jamia's a factor but feelings fade ya know, people move on. Oh! and lyn and marcus my favorites! I can see why Marcus is pissed but I hope these two work it out.
It's natural to want to hurt the people who have hurt you. I hope they can pull through. Anyway, great read. Can't wait for the next story where you answer all our queries. Don't make me wait too long ;)
xoAuthor's response
Oh thank you for your compliments I appreciate them. I always assume readers are fans, any particular reason why you're not? Don't worry won't judge you just curious. I'm not really into those fan meets and they fall in love stories, although mine's not far from that but I like the drama and uncertainty that I was able to throw in there to give it a nice little twist. I had a lot of surprises as far as the next installment goes so I hope you enjoy it as much as this one. I hope I deliver. Thank you so much for taking this journey with me, your comments have meant alot.
Reign xForbidden
(#) URAFever22 2009-06-04
Holy flannel shirt! Reign you did not dissapoint. I have to say I didn't think I would like this story in the beggining... I'm not even a my chemical romance fan... But I am a fan of good writing. I really can't stand your typical fan girl meets lead singer and they fall in love fic's. Truly annoying. But this was hilarious and had great drama. Not too overly dramatic which I appreaciated. I never liked Gerard and Chey together and I hope they never get back... honestly. Chey and Frank on the other hand I like. I know Jamia's a factor but feelings fade ya know, people move on. Oh! and lyn and marcus my favorites! I can see why Marcus is pissed but I hope these two work it out.
It's natural to want to hurt the people who have hurt you. I hope they can pull through. Anyway, great read. Can't wait for the next story where you answer all our queries. Don't make me wait too long ;)
xoForbidden
(#) blood-redstar 2009-06-04
wows, ive always loved this story, its been great from the begining.
it kept me on edge most of the time . it wasn't in your face, and it was very well written :D
But you nearly gave me a heart attack when i read this is the end, i was shocked and sad :O
you really shouldnt scare people like this, lol
anyways cant wait for the continual, it will be great, Thank youu for writing a good decent story!
xoxox HollyAuthor's response
Thank you, I'm glad it kept you on edge it meant I was doing it right as that was the desired effect.
Lol a heartattack? anotehr desired effect but you have my apologies.
Its on its way I'm having a battle of ideas at the moment trying to see if I can fit them ALL in.
Thanks for appreciating a decent story. I hope the next one is too your liking.
Reign xxForbidden
(#) cutegirl12356 2009-06-04
Oh my fucking gosh that was fucking unbelivable....I SOOOOOOOOO CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! This story is my drug.....PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT PART SOON!!!!Forbidden
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-06-05
oh man what a fab story!
i have been following this story for so long!
i can't wait for the sequal! oh and just because i am childish...
dammit i knew Frank's cock would be thicker than Gerard's. and it was kind of you to give Gerard the extra length!! you made me LOL!
anyway thanks so much!Forbidden
(#) URAFever22 2009-06-06
Your welcome! There's not really a particular reason as to why I'm not really into my chem, there just not my cup of tea... I like a few of there songs but by no means am I a hardcore fan like you guys. I'm a deftones, incubus, a perfect circle, bob dylan, the kills, radiohead, kings of leon, kind of gal. Just to name a few. I'm electic in that sense.Forbidden
(#) marcialj83 2009-06-06
HOLY FUCKING MOLY! THAT WAS AN AWESOME KICKASS STORY! LOVED IT. OH CHEY SHOULD TOTALLY HAVE FRANK'S BABY AFTER HAT PASSIONATE LOVE MAKING. OH I WANT THEM TOGETHER SO BADLY. OH MAN YES IN THE NEXT STORY SHE SHOULD BE PREGNANT AND ALL SORTS OF DRAMA CAN COME FROM THAT. THAT WOULD BE AWESOME.Forbidden
(#) falloutboyangel 2009-06-07
holy moutherfucker trucker! wat twisted fate this is.You have to make a sequal then have so much more twists then a happy ending if thats possible after frank cheated chey cheated geared cheat amber lied bobs upsets jamias really upset.... holy shit!Forbidden
(#) doyleangel 2009-06-08
wow, when i thought that was actually the end, i was like WHAT!!??? how could it end like this? I didn't want to imagine what happened, i want to acutally know... super excited for the sequel!!
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