(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-07-09That was beautiful. I love how you point out that someone can be quiet and not suicidle. YOu did really well on that... I often feel like Mikey in this.
I'm weird quiet and all I really do is write... people ask me why I'm so weird too.
I usually just ignore them. Next time I might just say, "I'm just Beonca."
But really that was amazing. can't wait to read another one of your, sure to be, masterpieces! =)
Author's responseThank you so much for that, I really really appreciate that from you (:
i'm gonna be honest and say part of this was written about me, I'm the same way as well. I don't like to do the talking I'm a listener, if you will. I wrote this in about 10 minutes tops? Not really knowing what feedback I would get (:
(#) mildlyobsessed 2009-07-21god, this is gorgeous! i love it!
you have amazing writing style, i love the repetition and direct address, you have skill!!!
this is absolutely amazing, what a brilliant story!
Author's responseThank you oh so much! I truly appreciate you saying that.
I just needed a way to express how I feel sometimes, and I'm glad you liked it (:
Thank you so much again.
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-11-02Hm, again I loved how he was ever so silent, he just read. But yet he was not suicidal or depressed, just - silent. He felt invisable to everyone else, but it seemed he didn't really mind. It's just the way things are supposed to be, right?
I loved this.
Author's responseYou pretty much have the right idea (:
Thank you as always for reviewing. It means alot. I'm glad you liked it.
(#) mysilentromance 2009-11-02This was very honest and real.
The one part when Mikey says 'just kidding' about jumping off the cliff was brilliant. It just goes to show how some people actually do go unnoticed.
You did a really good job on this.
Author's responseHonest? Real? Thank you! (:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes alot of people do go unnoticed. It's unfair sometimes...
Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate that.
- Hi there,
I loved this, it is so honest and true. The way that you wrote what he was feeling was amazing.
When I was reading about him jumping I was thinking didn't he say he wasn't suicidal? So glad that he didn't. He seems to be so used to being in himself that it is normal for him even if no one else understands.
I so get what is meant I'm a middle child with classic middle child syndrome talk about being invisible.
Any way great job as all your other stories.
Author's responseHey Moonshyne,
Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad everyone got the concept, I thought it would be confusing. Thanks for saying it was honest and real, I just wanted to write something that was... I'm an only child, and yet I feel invisible, I can understand middle child syndrome.
Thank you again, I appreciate that
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-02I luffed it :)
"I'm just Mikey."
What a great way to end it!
Sorry if I haven't read anything you've written recently :( I've been fairly busy with my school and such ..
Author's responseHey Amy (:
Don't worry about it, thank you for reviewing still...schoolwork hasn't been fun for me either, seriously stressful, so I understand (:
LUFF YOU TOO!
(#) xxFrerardxx 2009-11-03This was lovely. I love how you put so much emotion into this writing and how you prove he doesn't have to be suicidal to be lonely. You conveyed the message one hundred percent.
You should make more stories, there absolutely amazing. Best of luck.
Author's responseHi Sara,
Thank you so much. I appreciate that. I'm glad you got the idea, because someone can really be that way and not be suicidal to be lonely.
I have some new stories coming up, I just think I should finish the ones I have now before posting them (:
Thanks a million.
(#) thegayestgoth 2009-11-09WHOA!!!!! that. was. BRILLIANT. i was looking for a story to read while i was eating my lunch of tomato soup and cheese here at the Wesley, and I had to see what you've posted. That was fantastic. Incredibly vivid, painfully real, beautifully written. And honestly, that's how I feel sometimes. And it's a good thing. Sometimes, I really do like just being invisible. "Rain"...that's such a perfect title.
Author's responseHey there Jahnecakes. If you're reading this I need you to call me, or let me know when it's a good time to call [I don't want your mama to get mad (:] Yummy Tomato Soup xD
Thank you for the words, this is definitely one of my pieces I am most proud of. I was trying to write something different, and to show that people who are invisible, may just like be that way. It has its ups and downs, but it's not so bad sometimes...Again, thanks for saying it was real. I was going for that all the way..Not to mention, rain just might not be so bad like I thought it was (:
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