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  (#) corruptionchild 2009-06-23

  Wow, I really really liked this tbh. It's great!

  Author's response

  Hi (:
  
  Thank you reviewing, I appreciate that very much. I'm glad you liked it (:

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  (#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-06-24

  Aw...that was sad. But really good. You really captured your feelings in it very vividly. Great job!

  Author's response

  Thank you!
  
  It's rare I hear that (:
  
  
  
  Thanks again,
  
  -Lynai.

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  (#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-07-09

  That was beautiful. I love how you point out that someone can be quiet and not suicidle. YOu did really well on that... I often feel like Mikey in this.
  
  I'm weird quiet and all I really do is write... people ask me why I'm so weird too.
  
  I usually just ignore them. Next time I might just say, "I'm just Beonca."
  
  lol =)
  
  But really that was amazing. can't wait to read another one of your, sure to be, masterpieces! =)

  Author's response

  Thank you so much for that, I really really appreciate that from you (:
  
  i'm gonna be honest and say part of this was written about me, I'm the same way as well. I don't like to do the talking I'm a listener, if you will. I wrote this in about 10 minutes tops? Not really knowing what feedback I would get (:
  
  Thanks again.
  
  -Lynai.

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  (#) mildlyobsessed 2009-07-21

  god, this is gorgeous! i love it!
  you have amazing writing style, i love the repetition and direct address, you have skill!!!
  this is absolutely amazing, what a brilliant story!
  
  xox

  Author's response

  Thank you oh so much! I truly appreciate you saying that.
  
  I just needed a way to express how I feel sometimes, and I'm glad you liked it (:
  
  Thank you so much again.
  
  -Lynai.

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  (#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-11-02

  Hm, again I loved how he was ever so silent, he just read. But yet he was not suicidal or depressed, just - silent. He felt invisable to everyone else, but it seemed he didn't really mind. It's just the way things are supposed to be, right?
  
  I loved this.
  
  F xoxo.

  Author's response

  You pretty much have the right idea (:
  
  Thank you as always for reviewing. It means alot. I'm glad you liked it.
  
  xoxo

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  (#) mysilentromance 2009-11-02

  This was very honest and real.
  The one part when Mikey says 'just kidding' about jumping off the cliff was brilliant. It just goes to show how some people actually do go unnoticed.
  
  You did a really good job on this.

  Author's response

  Honest? Real? Thank you! (:
  
  I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes alot of people do go unnoticed. It's unfair sometimes...
  
  Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate that.

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  (#) Moonshyne 2009-11-02

  Hi there,
  
  I loved this, it is so honest and true. The way that you wrote what he was feeling was amazing.
  
  When I was reading about him jumping I was thinking didn't he say he wasn't suicidal? So glad that he didn't. He seems to be so used to being in himself that it is normal for him even if no one else understands.
  
  I so get what is meant I'm a middle child with classic middle child syndrome talk about being invisible.
  
  Any way great job as all your other stories.

  Author's response

  Hey Moonshyne,
  
  Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad everyone got the concept, I thought it would be confusing. Thanks for saying it was honest and real, I just wanted to write something that was... I'm an only child, and yet I feel invisible, I can understand middle child syndrome.
  
  Thank you again, I appreciate that
  
  xoxo

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  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-02

  I luffed it :)
  "I'm just Mikey."
  What a great way to end it!
  
  Sorry if I haven't read anything you've written recently :( I've been fairly busy with my school and such ..
  
  LUFF YOU!
  
  AR

  Author's response

  Hey Amy (:
  
  Don't worry about it, thank you for reviewing still...schoolwork hasn't been fun for me either, seriously stressful, so I understand (:
  
  Thankies again!
  
  LUFF YOU TOO!

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  (#) xxFrerardxx 2009-11-03

  This was lovely. I love how you put so much emotion into this writing and how you prove he doesn't have to be suicidal to be lonely. You conveyed the message one hundred percent.
  You should make more stories, there absolutely amazing. Best of luck.
  -Saraa xxx

  Author's response

  Hi Sara,
  
  Thank you so much. I appreciate that. I'm glad you got the idea, because someone can really be that way and not be suicidal to be lonely.
  
  I have some new stories coming up, I just think I should finish the ones I have now before posting them (:
  
  Thanks a million.
  
  xoxo Lynai.

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  (#) thegayestgoth 2009-11-09

  WHOA!!!!! that. was. BRILLIANT. i was looking for a story to read while i was eating my lunch of tomato soup and cheese here at the Wesley, and I had to see what you've posted. That was fantastic. Incredibly vivid, painfully real, beautifully written. And honestly, that's how I feel sometimes. And it's a good thing. Sometimes, I really do like just being invisible. "Rain"...that's such a perfect title.
  
  ~jahne

  Author's response

  Hey there Jahnecakes. If you're reading this I need you to call me, or let me know when it's a good time to call [I don't want your mama to get mad (:] Yummy Tomato Soup xD
  
  Thank you for the words, this is definitely one of my pieces I am most proud of. I was trying to write something different, and to show that people who are invisible, may just like be that way. It has its ups and downs, but it's not so bad sometimes...Again, thanks for saying it was real. I was going for that all the way..Not to mention, rain just might not be so bad like I thought it was (:
  
  Love you,
  Luma.

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