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• A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-16

  Awwuh, poor Pete! But.. I don't think you'd make Trick evil- Wait, you totally would! You'd make him evil, or at least he'd SEEM like it, trick somebody(like William) into thinking he wants to work for them, and then steal Andrea..
  
  Nah, LoL, but that'd be pretty cool!
  
  Luff ya!
  Revenge

  Author's response

  It's a great idea! One small problem though - but without giving away some of the plot, I can't tell you what it is! Sorry!!
  
  Going back to yours later - it's a long one, and I hate reading chapters in sections or reading fast - I'm a slow reader, I like to picture everything. So I'll make sure I have the time to read it properly.
  
  Thanks for reviewing!! Really glad you're still enjoying it (and that you weren't put off by the fact it still says it's chapters 12 & 13 - the story updated, before I had time to change the heading! Next time, I'll do that first!)
  
  Sas x

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  (#) charliexbrown 2009-08-16

  Oh noes, cliffhanger!!
  
  I hope Patrick isn't evil in the end. Cos I could so see him and Pete becoming a team! Like the 118 guys!... (If you don't live in the UK you won't get that. Oh well :D)But if he is evil... it would make him sort of bad-boy sexy. xD
  
  And no, Andrea!! Don't fall prey to William!! (even though he's so lovely... -fangirl face-)
  
  Can't wait for the next chapter!

  Author's response

  Lol!! The 118 guys!! :D Who're you gonna call? VampBusters!
  
  Yes, how will Patrick be when he wakes up and if he does seem good, how will they know for sure?
  
  I can see major flashbacks to how they would have reacted to Pete, suddenly reappearing back at the warehouse after nearly three months trapped in Beckett's mansion.
  
  Thanks for the review!! So glad you're still enjoying it!!
  
  Sas x

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  (#) nadialexandra 2009-08-16

  BOOYAH, BIYOTCH! >:3 I'm telling you... Patrick would make the sexiest fucking vampire ever. (admitit;youknowhewould) Stillz~ First of all, I'm just hoping Pete doesn't have a craving for human blood, now that he's had it. Let's forget about Patrick for a second (Whutttt? O_O That does not sound like something I'd do...) and think about Pete (wtf am I, a fangirl?) here. If Pete's bloodlust becomes even stronger and Patrick can't handle Holy Water to create the shakes, and re-proportion everything correctly to fit their needs... how the Hell do they keep in control? Trial and error using Joe and Andy- having them so close when they could possibly just attack them? I'm not really liking that thought.
  
  Second... Andrea and William. heeheeWilliamthinksshe'spurrty. I just had to say that; sorry. So now he's going to use Andrea to track down the boys? Smart man. Seriously. You'd never expect WILLIAM fucking BECKETT to be evil. He looks like he'd crack in half if you hug him too hard- really. I love the irony of it. ^-^
  
  Anyways. So if Andrea does find them and turns them in- will he want Patrick? He's pretty. If he doesn't want him, I'll gladly take him. (Fuck. Fangirlness. GO AWAY, FANGIRLNESS.) Will he want to take him as well as Pete; and use Andy and Joe as slaves? Then what will happen to Andrea? Will Pete turn Patrick correctly so he doesn't die? Will Patrick wake up evil? -gasp- QUESTIONS.
  
  :D I need a life~
  
  -xoxo

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  (#) areyounormal 2009-08-16

  Heya!!
  
  I guess Andy or Joe will have to find a willing priest to provide the Holy Water now. Even Pete could hold the bottle, even though the look on his face as he did (in the video) suggested that he couldn't hold it for long. So I'm assuming that Patrick will be able to too. Getting the blend right could prove tricky though. As you state, Pete's tasted human blood and as much as he'd probably hate to admit it, he liked it - a lot.
  
  Now then, William. He knows exactly where they are. The priest would have told him, but I'm going with the age-old idea that vampires can't enter a home without being invited - the reason I'm going with that is the fact that, it's not just their operational base, they live there. Why do they live there? Because they know they're safe from vampire attack whilst inside.
  This is why Beckett needs to draw them out OR get Andrea in, whilst under his control - another reason for not turning her. But yes, he is very much the smitten kitten and genuinely wants her for himself. But, I have to say it - you got to question someone who can only get a girl through mind control ;) (oh, but he is so lovely, really)
  
  There are lots of questions and, if I'm honest, even I don't have all the answers yet. I know roughly how it goes, but the details are a little vague as yet.
  
  Don't question your life! What could be better than a harmless but fun interest in music and the bands that make us feel happier for listening to them? AND give us an outlet for our creative side too!! SOunds ideal to me :D
  
  Thanks for reviewing, as ever! I hope I don't let you down in the coming chapters!
  
  Sas x
  
  
  

  Author's response

  Oops! I reviewed instead of responded! :-/

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  (#) Moonshyne 2009-08-16

  Hey there Sas,
  
  I feel really bad for Pete, he has to turn his friend in order to save his life. Now he has to live with that fact. I really hope he's not evil. I think it will kill Pete if that happened.
  
  William is pure evil for using Andrea to get to the boys.
  
  How can the guy be smart enough for that but too stupid to realize he's being duped by Spencer?
  
  

  Author's response

  I can't say much about your first point until the next chapter, or maybe the one after it - but all will be revealed soon!
  
  William, is, indeed, very evil and very intelligent. But don't forget, Spencer's not stupid either. He's been planning and waiting for his chance for a very long time.
  Look at what Beckett's been given to work with:
  
  Brendon - a known paranoiac and something of an ambitious loose cannon.
  
  Spencer - Pete describes him almost as a Class A suck up. Not making waves, following Beckett without question
  
  Beckett finds his prisoners gone with Spencer run through with a blessed sword and locked in a cell and blaming Brendon, who can't offer any plausible alternative account - who is Beckett going to believe?
  
  But, as I said to Amy - I can't say any more on this without giving too much away! Sorry!
  
  Thanks so much for reviewing!! :D
  
  Sas x

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  (#) Rainbow_CupcakesXD 2009-10-21

  Whoa.. (this is Amy btw) I totally missed a LOT of reading in the past, like, month LoL

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