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'Mikey struggled and looked in to his brother wild eyes. Gerard stared back into Mikey’s pleading eyes, his own eyes, his Grandmothers eyes.'
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My Dark Angel
(#) wolf2008lllll 2010-04-16
Aw, you love us, now sweet! ;D
Ok, I'm going in for a shorter review because I have to start a school project that we had two months to do... and It's due in in 4 days...
End-of-life-story. Lol.
I like this chapter, it a lot more descriptive than your other story. (Though i do still love art of love.)And even though we didnt see much of 'nice' Gerard in the first chapter, I also think it's great to read how much he's changed and how he acts around the people he loves.
Well, that'll do. It's gonna be so cool reading about them finally meeting again- for the first time in years.
She must be very magical effect on Gerard, and him on her, seeing as they hardly know eachother and can't stop thinking about eachoter. It's very sweet really...
I know you weren't asking for sympathy, and I'm not gonna say sorry like people do, 'casue I don't even know you. But I understand how you feel. I'm not asking for sympathy either- my Grandad was an alcoholic and was suffering for years before he died. I like to think he's happier now...
So I hope your grandad is not suffering and gets better. =)
End of life story part 2- Part 3 comming shortly. Nah joke; I won't bore you anymore ;)
^_^Author's response
Yes I do love you :) I love you all :)
Oh god, good luck! :S I always do that!
I'm glad you like it :) I like this story more too, I think this one is more, grown up and darker. And yes, Gerard is trying to change, bless him.
Yes, I can't wait for that either!
Yes, well if you believe the legends; Love at first sight is a powerful bond that can last years, though no matter what.
Thank you for your understanding, unfortunately, my Grandad is suffering quite a bit and will never get better. One day the illness will get the better of him. Until then I just have to spend as much time with him as possible and hope he isn't in too much pain.
Thanks for the review!
Lu
My Dark Angel
(#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-16
Ahh!
This story is getting so damn exciting!
Will he meet her, will he not?!
I DON'T KNOW! xD
Update as soon as you can.
I NEED more! :D
xo
- Evie
P.S I'm sad that 'The Art Of Love' hasn't been updated. I miss it :(Author's response
Haha, I'm glad it's exiting.
I can't tell you that, I don't know yet!
Will update :)
Okay! calm down, the next chapters nearly done now. :)
Oh and I know, writers block still! If you have any ideas for the story, please, email me or something!
Thanks for the review!
LuMy Dark Angel
(#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-16
Oh and I hope your grandpa gets better :)
xoAuthor's response
Thank you but unfortunately, my Grandad will never get better. One day the illness will take him. I just have to spend as much time with him as possible and hope he isn't in too much pain for now.
LuMy Dark Angel
(#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-16
Idea for 'The Art Of Love'...
okay, so Gerard decideds to let Rhi watch band practice.
She knows someone who plays shows and they get a gig.
a famous person notices them and gives them a record deal.
Rhi starts to worry that Gee will leave her because he is becoming famous and going to go on tour.
Frank asks me to marry him xD and I say yes but Mikey is against it and there is a BIG fall out and frank leaves the band for a while and you can make it up from there.
it proberly sucks but its worth a shot ;D
xo
- Evie
(Your no.1 fan!!) xDDAuthor's response
I think I actually love you! (In a non-lesbian way)
That's amazing! although some bits are a bit out of my writing character :)
Thank you!
Lu
(Your ever grateful subject)
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