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10 reviewsA nice sunny day, what could be better than a trip to the beach. Can Archie follow Atlanta into the water and get past his own fears?
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Demons Within Me
(#) StinkFace 2006-05-08
Ahaha Creepy Archie is on the prowl. He better watch out for the hobo whose one eye is bigger than the other.
Hobo watches you.Author's response
ooo, creeeppyyy Archie. But aren't all guys (who are fighting the god of time while getting through jighschool with a blue hoodie and a purple mullet and mad whip skills) who are crushing on a girl weirdo's then? XDD Love you, DemeniorDemons Within Me
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-05-09
Hey, YAY It's me! Crickets chrip Ok I have to stop with the cricket thing. I'm really enjoying your story and I hope you update soon.Demons Within Me
(#) volleyball4ever 2006-05-14
I also think you should add onto this story soon because your writing style and technique probably astounds everyone here. Keep up teh awesome work, Demenior!Author's response
Wha-what? Wow... you've just flattered me to the MAX... I honestly don't think my writing style is that great since there's a lot more I could improve on, but thank you for the compliment and I will keep up the good work! ~DemeniorDemons Within Me
(#) Pheonee 2006-05-29
I love it! I especially liked the but where you said Archie could have died right there and then--it's real funny.
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