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Mind Games
(#) Demenior 2006-05-30
aww, cute. Nice Jay/Theresa action going on here! I'd like to see some more Archie/Atlanta fluff for sure ;D
~DemeniorMind Games
(#) Arisey 2006-05-30
It was excellent! Ugh, I don't see why I bothered making an account here, with stories as good as these, my story looks soooo horrid. Anyway, the nicknames seemed kind of weird(I don't think Archie would really call her Terri), but it was still really good!Mind Games
(#) Pheonee 2006-05-31
Mua. XD I loved the tickle fight. I can just imagine Jay and Theresa fighting in raw fingers-to-ribs-and-other-ticklish-spots combat. That's good, make it funny and deep so everyone can imagine it.
I agree with the necknames. Terri sounds good, but Archie is shyer than a baby possum and if he called her that everyone would just think he went crazy. I'd also love some A-A fluff there, but nothing really serious like going into detail about kisses or...or...Mind Games
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-05-31
Nice job, never thought of Theresa having a nickname but it works. She does have a long name and it can be shortened. Nice Job, the use of her nickname is yours though, promise not to use it.
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