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Fireside Games
18 reviewsOk R (yes i changed it from NC-17 so people who are not logged in could read it.) may be a little harsh, or mabey not, please feel free to give me your opinion. Archie finally gets his way with A...
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Fireside Games
(#) Elsask 2006-05-30
very good, i am kinda not all to romantic so in one part i said eww(but it ain't your fault, it's mine i am immature) i really liked it keep on writingAuthor's response
Thanks for the review, and you cant say i did not warn you. Glad you liked it after you got past the eww part.Fireside Games
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-05-30
Ahh, so that's what happened. Thanks for the compliment by the way. I like your story, keep it up, you do have talent.Author's response
Me talent... this coming for you.. i think i might have accidently sucked up. Glad you liked it. Wow I think I am still in shock... Me talent.. this coming form someone who read my writing. Never heard that one before. Thanks so much. Though I still feel like a suck up, oh well.Fireside Games
(#) Pheonee 2006-05-31
Um...Archie's 18 and Atlanta's 17 is that right? Why would they be--um--you know, and in the hallway, then? All the same it's really good, and the rating's probably a good one. I mean, you don't want 13 year olds--especially 13 year olds who act like 5 year olds when it comes to fluff--reading about...that.Author's response
I think Archies 17 and Atlanta's 16, but you cant say i did not give you a warning... I actually gave two. Glad you liked it.Fireside Games
(#) Arisey 2006-05-31
Eh heh..a little inappropriate, but you rated it, it was my fault for not listening...Bah, it was good except in halfway when in Archie's dream they had...uh...yah.Author's response
Hey thanks, but I did warn you... twice (its rated NC-17 and has the X warning). And I know Archie's dream was a little well not for children. Though unfortunatly the WHOLE story was very easy to write. Oh well I gave fair warning.Fireside Games
(#) Demenior 2006-05-31
ah, man, that was an awesome story. Great job, and poor Archie! I was laughing so hard at the end XDD
~DemeniorAuthor's response
Hey thanks.. alot! For the review, complimaent and not complaining about the not for children part. Thanks again!!
Fireside Games
(#) StinkFace 2006-06-01
Hot stories make me giggle. So right now I am giggling insanely. And I love you for that.Author's response
Im not the only one who giggles at those sort of storys. Hehe, yea.Fireside Games
(#) VicTC 2006-06-04
Amazing. Too bad it was a dream though.Author's response
Had to make it a dream, can you see Atlanta giving her self up like that.Fireside Games
(#) Julius 2006-06-07
Poor Archie just in his dreams he can have Atlanta. Very well done.Author's response
Thanks.Fireside Games
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-06-10
To bad it was a dream, it had to be tho, coz its not really what Atlanta would doAuthor's response
Yea. Actually i dought that Archie would if he was awake, but hey in our dreams we all live our fantasys.Fireside Games
(#) 999 2006-06-23
.....how come....no paragraphs.....and spacings......cannot be read without discomfort.....Author's response
Ummm, not sure what happened here. I will try to fix that but i am not that great with Computers.
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