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Fireside Games18 reviews
Ok R (yes i changed it from NC-17 so people who are not logged in could read it.) may be a little harsh, or mabey not, please feel free to give me your opinion. Archie finally gets his way with A...
(#) Elsask 2006-05-30very good, i am kinda not all to romantic so in one part i said eww(but it ain't your fault, it's mine i am immature) i really liked it keep on writing
Author's responseThanks for the review, and you cant say i did not warn you. Glad you liked it after you got past the eww part.
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-05-30Ahh, so that's what happened. Thanks for the compliment by the way. I like your story, keep it up, you do have talent.
Author's responseMe talent... this coming for you.. i think i might have accidently sucked up. Glad you liked it. Wow I think I am still in shock... Me talent.. this coming form someone who read my writing. Never heard that one before. Thanks so much. Though I still feel like a suck up, oh well.
(#) Pheonee 2006-05-31Um...Archie's 18 and Atlanta's 17 is that right? Why would they be--um--you know, and in the hallway, then? All the same it's really good, and the rating's probably a good one. I mean, you don't want 13 year olds--especially 13 year olds who act like 5 year olds when it comes to fluff--reading about...that.
Author's responseI think Archies 17 and Atlanta's 16, but you cant say i did not give you a warning... I actually gave two. Glad you liked it.
(#) Arisey 2006-05-31Eh heh..a little inappropriate, but you rated it, it was my fault for not listening...Bah, it was good except in halfway when in Archie's dream they had...uh...yah.
Author's responseHey thanks, but I did warn you... twice (its rated NC-17 and has the X warning). And I know Archie's dream was a little well not for children. Though unfortunatly the WHOLE story was very easy to write. Oh well I gave fair warning.
(#) Demenior 2006-05-31ah, man, that was an awesome story. Great job, and poor Archie! I was laughing so hard at the end XDD
Author's responseHey thanks.. alot! For the review, complimaent and not complaining about the not for children part. Thanks again!!
(#) StinkFace 2006-06-01Hot stories make me giggle. So right now I am giggling insanely. And I love you for that.
Author's responseIm not the only one who giggles at those sort of storys. Hehe, yea.
(#) VicTC 2006-06-04Amazing. Too bad it was a dream though.
Author's responseHad to make it a dream, can you see Atlanta giving her self up like that.
(#) Julius 2006-06-07Poor Archie just in his dreams he can have Atlanta. Very well done.
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-06-10To bad it was a dream, it had to be tho, coz its not really what Atlanta would do
Author's responseYea. Actually i dought that Archie would if he was awake, but hey in our dreams we all live our fantasys.
(#) 999 2006-06-23.....how come....no paragraphs.....and spacings......cannot be read without discomfort.....
Author's responseUmmm, not sure what happened here. I will try to fix that but i am not that great with Computers.
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