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As i lay dying
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-07-01
Exciting so far! The plotline is interesting! But, I think the grammar needs a quick going though. You shoud also put it in a separate story. If you want to email me the story, I can do a quick grammar and spelling edit for you :) Just so it's a little easier to read, you know?
I don't want you to feel like it's a bad story. It's good! Just needs to be written a bit clearer is all. Like I said, if you want me to I will edit it, just email it to me; rlgrant@gmail.com
BleedingValentine xxAs i lay dying
(#) XCherrikidXD 2012-07-01
wow this is amazing i want to know more =)
please update when you can,,,pwese =3
~Lu lu xoxoAs i lay dying
(#) Bella_Jinxx 2012-07-01
"And the guy who looks like he's is KISS is Andy"
Oh my god XD
This is really really good!!
It just needs a bit of grammar/spelling, and if you need a beta reader, email me at
claires.chemical.romance@gmail.com
-Jinxxy xxxAuthor's response
ok i've sent you the story
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