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The Pride
In the two years since the 4th Great Shinobi War, the world has slowly slipped back into chaos. Having had his dream of becoming Hokage taken from him, he sets out to reshape the world in much the ...
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The Pride
(#) LeafRanger5 2014-07-08
Well this seems interesting. Though admittedly, if Sasuke starts mind controlling females or females being forced to be with him, I will end you. And it will be very painful.
Otherwise, nice work.The Pride
(#) jacksonblax 2014-07-08
This story is something I wanted to see written. I'm so glad you're the author to do it. I absolutely love Eroninja and the fact now Naruto is up against Sasuke(one of the characters that brings much frustration to me) is something that's really exciting. Fucking fantastic first chapter with the hottest lemons around and I can't wait what you have in store for the upcoming chapters. Glad to know you're writing another NaruHarem story and thanks for the awesomeness.The Pride
(#) Mzr90 2014-07-08
Eh it's alright. To be honest I was hoping to see this be different from Eroninja since I dislike the direction you took and Naruto's portrayal. Plus having Hinata and Sakura in the harem didn't help.
I was interested in this until the obvious appearance with Sakura and Hinata.
Anyway good luck with the rest.The Pride
(#) helel0 2014-07-08
Definitely blew my expectations away.
I think I'll enjoy this more instinctual Naruto just as much as the one in Eroninja.
I also feel how your telling of the aftermath of the fourth war is very believable.
Also Sakura's inner voice was very amusing.
I know u said eroninja will take priority and I'm happy to hear that, but I'm really looking forward to more of this story also.
The Pride
(#) UncleFester81 2014-07-08
Hinata in the harem was a cold shower for me, I think I'll pass sighThe Pride
(#) redslayer 2014-07-08
Interesting ideas for a story with potential for a big story. Personal dislike for canon Sakura, particularly after how she was in the most recent chapters, but she's always good for a harem pairing with naruto. Hinata, I liked, a character with potential to be molded in many directions, kinda like Naruto. Enjoyed reading, kept me guessing where things were going and you set up for evil Sasuke without making it overtop or bashing (I have no problem with a bashing sasuke story, unless he is the main antagonist cos that goes down a road that takes away the thrill of the story, even more the on longer it is.).
And do i detect foreshadowing in Karin being involved with Naruto and his friends later.
If this helps with your ideas later, I would suggest an occasional scene or to with a bit more comedic flare, its the reason the Naruto series has lasted so long, little scenes just to keep it light hearted at times.
Good luck and keep the awsome chapters.The Pride
(#) theonetrueslacker 2014-07-08
This would probably end up along the lines Eroninja popularity wise. If you can try to update this on a regular bases it doesn't have to be once a week but once a month would be nice since it seems like it won't be sex ordinate.
Looking forward to future updates on both stories.The Pride
(#) I_am_NRG2 2014-07-08
LemonSage, you're doing fine with your story, and I mean YOUR story. We, the readers, can influence how the story goes, but you make the last call, the line up I can't really complain with along with the logic to back it up.
I hope to read more from you soon.
Ciao, I am NRG
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