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The Pride
In the two years since the 4th Great Shinobi War, the world has slowly slipped back into chaos. Having had his dream of becoming Hokage taken from him, he sets out to reshape the world in much the ...
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The Pride
(#) FicWader 2014-07-08
Sounds great. I just hope there wont be any forced stuff by Sasuke. He would have swarms of blind fangirls. Just hope he wont be forcing "strong" kunoichi to bear Uchiha brats with any laws passed by obviously corrupt or sharinganed council.
Though I hope you will have at least some ppl on the council worried about the ONLY sharingan alive possibly mind-controlling persons in power - judged by his clean removal of Tsunade herself and his influence over Daimyo. Hyuga seem to see through that stuff as seen with Ao at the summit of Kage.
Anyways I looke forward to all your work immensely.The Pride
(#) Leonas 2014-07-08
Well... This is very different. After reading half of eroninja (still reading it but thought I'd give this a try too) I did NOT expect naruto to act like this. Nor did I see the betrayal happening. And admitedly i almost plotted your death for not explaining why Hinata (despite confessing) wasn't with him... that is until you actually DID explain. Now I just want to wait and see whats going to happen with this obvious alpha male patroling the elemental nations.The Pride
(#) Europefan01 2014-07-08
Hola mi aningo, Como estas? Doing well I guess. Anyways, nice chapter and beginning of your new series, I hope it had the IT factor as the KICK ASS/A+ Eroninja series. Such as Common Sense, Discipline, Equality, Humility, Family Relations and the most important ingredient of them all Character Development. Knowing you TLS, you will succeed like you always do.
On the serious note, I am very pleased that you have a open mind regarding the scene with Naruto and Sakura together made me think about why I couldn't care less about the canon version and how much that incompetent moron Kishimoto has constantly fuck up ever since the whole thing started. In fact, what Sakura did in this chapter In My Personal Point of View is the sign of her destiny with the Chosen One is set in stone and did not regret it one single bit. Hell, even Shizune and Hinata will help him anyway they can, for now until anyone else who's closer to Naruto lend a helping hand soon.
Quite frankly, I am glad that you're a Naru/Saku fan and some readers who reviewed this story need to learn that EVERYONE deserves a second chance to make things right in order to move on! And Sakura is THE ultimate exception to that rule! Moreover, I'm a Naru/Tsu fan all the way as well. As for Sasuke, I have nothing but absolute resent towards him for taking Naruto's dream of becoming Hokage taken away from him. However, Naruto will find the way to restart his new life with a new drive to reshape the world as he sees fit.
That's is all I got to say about this first chapter, and I am not going to grade it as of yet. It's too early.
So keep up the excellent work and update soon hombre.
Until next time mi amingo.
Adios
The Pride
(#) Europefan01 2014-07-08
Hola mi aningo, Como estas? Doing well I guess. Anyways, nice chapter and beginning of your new series, I hope it had the IT factor as the KICK ASS/A+ Eroninja series. Such as Common Sense, Discipline, Equality, Humility, Family Relations and the most important ingredient of them all Character Development. Knowing you TLS, you will succeed like you always do.
On the serious note, I am very pleased that you have a open mind regarding the scene with Naruto and Sakura together made me think about why I couldn't care less about the canon version and how much that incompetent moron Kishimoto has constantly fuck up ever since the whole thing started. In fact, what Sakura did in this chapter In My Personal Point of View is the sign of her destiny with the Chosen One is set in stone and did not regret it one single bit. Hell, even Shizune and Hinata will help him anyway they can, for now until anyone else who's closer to Naruto lend a helping hand soon.
Quite frankly, I am glad that you're a Naru/Saku fan and some readers who reviewed this story need to learn that EVERYONE deserves a second chance to make things right in order to move on! And Sakura is THE ultimate exception to that rule! Moreover, I'm a Naru/Tsu fan all the way as well. As for Sasuke, I have nothing but absolute resent towards him for taking Naruto's dream of becoming Hokage taken away from him. However, Naruto will find the way to restart his new life with a new drive to reshape the world as he sees fit.
That's is all I got to say about this first chapter, and I am not going to grade it as of yet. It's too early.
So keep up the excellent work and update soon hombre.
Until next time mi amingo.
Adios
The Pride
(#) Batros940 2014-07-08
Very nice story. I never liked how in some of these stories Naruto just rolls over and accepts Sasuke as hokage.I always like stories where Sasuke could become hokage only for Naruto to lash out at Sasuke and ruin him as as shinobi, before taking the hokage title for himself.The Pride
(#) Robobagins 2014-07-08
A great start to a brand new series. I look forward to where you plan to take this and the ripples Naruto's actions will have on the world.
Good luck and keep up the great work :)The Pride
(#) heromtz 2014-07-09
Nice story, I like the intro so far, however the plot is what really catch my attention, since we know that the story take place after 2 years, is more likely that many characters from Eroninja wont appear here since in canon many are dead or dying right now and other are possibly in Sasuke's power(damn him), so is sad that we wouldn't see Tayuya,Mabui,Karin,Ino,Tenten,yugito,fuu,mito and many many others.
By the way, did Naruto was able to bring people back to life with a Dragob ball no jutsu or something? that way there is chance to save many females if not, to bad.
Also I'm with you about Sasuke, the guy was asshole from day one, at first kind of feel bad for the guy, because of his family death, but then the guy keep bitching about Uchiha this and Uchiha that, and the jerk keep acting as if everything he does is fine because mommy and daddy are dead, the guy literally betray his village and nation for the guy who killed his leader, who lead an attack against his home and was willing to kill his "best friend" to do it and the only reason he didn't was because he didn't want to follow his brother path, so again because of his pride.
Kishi most realized that Sasuke is not the kind of guy that you called best friend, even more, he is not the kind that help you at all, I would never want someone like that to cover my back, it would be like using a snake to watch you and dont expect to bite you.
Anyway good job so far, is nice to see that you are exploring more than just eroninja, but just one little favor before finish, please save Karin, she dont deserve to be with sasuke, is like watching a less crazy but more evil joker beating a redhead harly quinn, please your own only hope.
peace.The Pride
(#) arrotzang 2014-07-09
Wow I love it, can't wait for more. A baser Naruto would be an interesting side to see, I'm sure he has allies and friends that will help him in this case.
Eagerly awaiting the reactions of all the villages to Naruto's going missing nin. The title reminds me of the Lion King's pride lands and kind of fitting if this story is gonna partake in a creation of a territory or new ninja village.
Thanks for the hard work! Appreciate your efforts as always since you do this for your own and our benefit! Might I suggest putting up your little black book story chapters on fic wad also?
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