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• The Pride

  (#) plums 2014-07-15

  No offense... I loath sakura stories, and I feel a bit annoyed I read as far as i did into chapter 1 only to blunder into a 2-year post-4th-Shinobi-war Naruto who still acts like an idiot and is hung up on Sakura.

• The Pride

  (#) Europefan01 2014-07-15

  Hola mi amingo, I can see why this new series take an beginning phase as I read it closely.
  
  Later
  
  P.S: plums, you're an idiot. Did you not know that TLS is a Naru/Saku fan, huh? Check his Devianart page while you at it! Another thing, Naruto did not act like an idiot, while he's with Tsunade handling his report and Sakura truly wanted to be with Naruto after seeing Sasuke what he truly was and determined to make up for her past mistakes! Oy, quit being an imbecile and start re-read this chapter, to the next where Naruto begin to start his journey with Sakura, Hinata and Shizune joining him in the process.
  
  Moreover, TLS's version is way better than Kishi-baka's version to the point where I always enjoy with so much appreciation. Like his A+ story Eroninja, he based everything on real life situations and events that attract open minded readers like myself. Unlike Kishi-baka and most Fanfic authors, TLS knows that Character Development is always a must when it comes to interactions with the characters in a very good way. Not to mention the bad where some characters starting to do evil things that makes the Main Character fight for what is right for himself and his love ones.
  
  So next time when you read TLS's second masterpiece and Eroninja itself, LEARN to use common sense to read and see the difference between his version and Kishi-baka's and why he is very different from other authors when it comes to excellent storytelling.

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  (#) Dragonlord27 2014-07-15

  I loved the first chapter and Naruto being a father is something I am happy to see.

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  (#) Ghostfreak 2014-07-23

  Its definitely an idea I never would've taken into consideration but I am loving where this is going. I especially like the part where Tsunade basically points out that just because Sasuke did help them in the war. The "Curse of Hatred" thing should not be used as an excuse to try and justify his actions, especially considering that he only found out about long after Itachi was killed. The touch with Shizune was especially nice, but honestly I enjoy alot of things with this story overall, to much for me to list. But I cannot lie, I am damn well proud of you dude, keep on shining and doing what you do best.Can't wait to read more.

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  (#) Guydum77 2014-08-05

  you know do to all the drugs orochi pumped into sosuke could have made him starle as orochi would just clone saksukes body insted of waiting for a new baby every 10 years or so. just a idea. ps i hate sasuke as well.

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  (#) AJGuardian 2014-08-12

  Okay, this is the first time I've read this story. I can't say that I don't like this. It's bloody interesting and different. Or I just haven't read enough different fics that have the same plot lines. Still....I like where this is going.

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  (#) Teturo 2014-10-29

  There are times to fight primal instincts and times to give in. This sounds like a very fun romp into the brighter side of lust ^_~

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  (#) Javier808 2015-01-14

  I am glad somebody finally see's Shizune as more than a background character. You have done a superb job which seems to be on par if the other work you do is anything to go by. I actually stopped reading the manga a few years back because of the way it was going. Because of a friend putting me on Ero-ninja, I picked it back up and then put it back down. Too much cover your ass on the plot holes. /Don't get me wrong, great characters great universe for hours upon hours of attention grabbing material (on a site with it's whole Naruto section of fanfic) You just made cannon bearable for me. And as always keep up the great work and that new shit coming. More Shizune Please!!!
  

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  (#) loganhunter2 2015-02-09

  The only problem I have with your stories is the freaking daymio guys since they were basically figure heads in the entire manga leaving all military desicions to their kage ......even when choosing danzo he was just choosin randomly so I don't understand how after all naruto did this happens 9 / 10

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  (#) Noctus_Darkfire 2015-04-18

  from the title I assumed that this might have some furry elements to it. because a Pride is a distinctly animal term. it doesn't really translate to a group of humans quite as well. even if they are more instinctual, to call a group of humans a pride tend to suggest some animal characteristics in the physical sense.
  
  now if that is indeed the case then I applaud your ingenuity and look forward to seeing it. if not, well you might want to reconsider the title as it is a little misleading. the only reason the word Pack works for the Inuzuka is because of their physical similarities to their canine partners. they literally appear as if they are part dog. and thus the term pack does indeed fit in that case.
  
  so again, to truly be called a "Pride" requires some furry aspects. even if its just the cliché Hanyou traits we see in Inuyasha and certain Naruto fics. namely the ears, eyes, teeth, nails, and the addition of a tail and enhanced senses and physical capabilities...
  
  actually that might be an interesting story to write, ill have to consider that for later.

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