(#) wretchedmongrel 2006-08-31This is a great story so far and I really enjoy it but I have one MASSIVE gripe.
As soon as possible could you please edit the summary to be definitive on whether or not this will be slash? I won't ask for pairings but homo-sexual material, especially when Harry is the homo, will put me off just about any story however well written. Thank you for your consideration.
It's a great story and this take on the prophecy is one I've never seen before so props! there.
Author's responseI can fully appreciate your concern and I have updated all of my summaries to reflect, in my mind, that there will be no focus on 'ships. Too much going on and all that rot. LOL. In any case, be at ease...this is not a 'ship fic.
- Loved your story... up till tis chapter, that is.
Sorry, but you just fell into so many cliches (and bad ones at that, good cliches is another thing)it's not even funny anymore.
What was it, 6 heir rings? that's just overkill. Magical reserves, and then some more magical reserve when he had just become very powerfull already? Overkill again.
I'm going to keep reading, because like I said, I enjoyed the previous chapters, but I somewhat fear for the future.
Too leave on a positive note though, I did enjoy the Neville sideline.
Author's responseWith so many stories being written about the Harry potter 'verse what was once original has become common, and therefore cliche. I do my best to present as many original ideas as possible, but hey, a little cliche is unavoidable. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers!
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-09-01Hmmm, a poisonous wand. That's unique. Snake teeth are curved, however. Did Olivander straighten it out?
Heir to all those houses. Wonder what that's going to do.
I can already guess that Harry found out that there's a blood relative he should have been with instead of the Dursleys, and that's what's got him angry at the first parchment. Either that, or he's not really related to petunia
Good story. Thanks for writing.
Author's responseThe wand will have a slight curve but not much of one. I don't picture the basilisk fang as being extremely curved to begin with.
It was already stated a few chapters ago that Harry is not related to Petunia as Lily was adopted in my AU version of the world.
Thanks for reviewing!
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-09-02So far I'm rather impressed with the story, however I found this when doing a Harry/Tonks search and so far there has only been one interaction of any merit between the two. I do hope that if this is going to happen that it does start developing. So far this has been more Voldemort/Lucius Slash.
Author's responseThere are no set 'ships in this fic. I will have an Author's Note at the beginning of a chapter if I change my mind and decide to have a pairing develop more fully. Any interactions that occur will most likely not lead to anything meaningful...just like Tom and Lucius' little encounter at the Revel was definitely not about a meaningful anything beyond the interaction between a Dom and a Sub.
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