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• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-13

  Good chapter with an important change in the Harry/Karina relationship, if we can really call it that.
  
  You accidentally pasted the story twice. I've done the same thing when I had to make a change. When you click Edit for the chapter, make sure to delete all of the text in the box before re-adding it from your computer, that should take care of it.
  
  Looking forward to more.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I got rid of the double posting. I am glad you enjoyed the maturing of Harry.
  
  Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) DrT 2006-10-14

  Excellent, although for some reason I thought we were long past Harry's birthday. I enjoyed Luna's letter, and I hope we see moreinfo from 'back home'
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Chapter 1 is set on September 1st 1996. We haven't quite gotten back there yet. A few more chapters and we'll be there.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-10-14

  Another wonderful chapter. I hope Harry has a chance to see the Grandaughter again. Also I love the Harry/Luna letters. Great fic.

  Author's response

  Thanks! Right now Harry isn't sure whether or not he wants to see Lauren Starless Sky again anytime soon.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-10-16

  Good one. I like that the jaguar is influencing Harry's thinking. Nice troll attack. Interesting developments with Karina. I see that ending in tragedy; not sure if her enemies will win, or she'll fall out with Harry.
  
  Wonder if the Harry Hunters will come upon them in the jungle. If they do, will they get away alive? Or will the group try subtifuge and convince them that Harry isn't there?
  
  I can see the cartoon squirrel on the shirts :-) That would be funny if Harry and Luna showed up somewhere wearing them.
  
  And who sent the searchers? Dumbledore, or Voldemort?
  
  Exciting story. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing it.
  
  Tom A.

  Author's response

  Perhaps we haven't seen the last of the bounty hunters. Good question on who sent them. One day I'll let you know. Thanks for the review.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) Rake 2006-10-19

  Nice update...as usual...I am completly in love with the level of originality and inovation in this fic. First of all I think I only read about aprox 3-4 fics where Harry doesn't live happily ever after with the first girl he gets romanticly involved with...very few authors really understand that there is no way in hell that you can possibly find your "soul mate" at 16 in your first try (without the level of maturity that Harry has shown in your fic). The animagus/animage transformation was quaite simply the best I have ever read. The settup, the ritual and the hunt were magnificent but the new concept about about clarity was the best thing about it. The writting stile however is the thing that gives your fic the edge over all the other "standard" fics out there. Overall the originality and the new conceps make this fic a must read in the world of fanfiction and I personally think it's the best indy!Harry story out there
  
  p.s. I just have to ask...what girl do you plan do make Harry end up with...because Funbags and Weasel slut are out of the picture...right? PLEASE, PLEASE don't make Harry forgive them...I beg of you....

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. It's filed on ff.net under Harry/Luna for a reason, though nothing of interest is going to happen until the sequel. Glad you enjoyed it.~Jim

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