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Harry Appears to be Troubled
2 reviewsHarry Potter's new adventure into awkward indoctrination. HPPH/HPYR/RPYH
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Harry Potter and the Innate Malapropism
(#) LeRob 2007-03-20
This was good for a laugh, Jeram. The first chapter could use some cleaning up, maybe, but the second was really quite funny, once I figured out what you were trying to satirize. You didn't call Hedwig 'girl' enough, though -- I expect to see that in future chapters, along with the wondahful powers of house-elves.
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(#) Circaea 2011-01-31
Awesome. I'm not sure I have ever seen so many cliches in one place before! Heck, there's stuff _I_ do in there. It's like an advanced course in what to watch out for when writing fan fiction!Author's response
Well, thank you so much! You've given me the inspiration to write more of this silly thing. And I think cliches are something we all do - obviously some are more annoying than others, eh?
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