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• A Christmas Mission

  (#) iheartyou07 2006-10-21

  hey, just a little heads up, you posted this chapter 3 times, lol.
  
  I found this hilarious, and at times I had to stop reading, and try to breathe again. lol. I loved it, it fits Atlanta perfectly! the JT is cute, and Herry is soo adorable. Love the Oxy-Lady, lol. She was fuuny:D I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!!

  Author's response

  Thanks for the heads up, the computer was being really slow and I wa sbeing impatient...
  
  Wow, I'm amazed that I can write that funny. Seriously. And I ket thinking I was getitng Atlanta way out of character, but thanks for letting me know you think it fits her. I'll be having plenty more cute scenes between several other couples, some expected and some will hopefully be a surprise. And Herry IS so adorable, he deserves a big hug. I'm trying really hard to capture his naiive, not exactly stupid-cow, but very careing side that we don't see often in fanfictions. I'm so surprised that Oxy-Lady was funny! I thoguht she was a serious tension-moment! Haha, thanks for the review and I'm working on the next chapter at this moment.

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) chickiedeedo 2006-10-21

  Lol I loved it update soon!

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) princessofoyownworld 2006-10-21

  Very good, and kinda funny, I'm half asleep right now so I'll reread it and probably catch more of thr jokes...or realize that it's not a funny chapter. But it was well writen as always.

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) Sea_Glass 2006-10-21

  omg this is like one of the bestest storys on here. i love it
  its so good, i will for sure
  rate it .love it.
  please update soonnn

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) caity_party_princess 2006-10-21

  That was a really good chappie, I've lost my voice and every time I laughed it hurt so much, please update soon!

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) RainPaw 2006-10-21

  This Story Is The Best Ever!!!!
  I love the way you've put the POV. And all these little things in Atlanta's mind. And the cute nicknames like Noah or the Mother or Oxy, that was quite a twist who would think some one would think that. Archie's so sweat! Carrying Atlanta even though it hurt his ankle I did that once and nearly ended up with cruchs, Great story please update soon!

  Author's response

  Wow, that's something I seem to be hearing from a lot of people about this story. I wonder why people think that? I'm trying really hard to make it sound like Atlanta, meaning I can't add as much detail as I want sometime sbecause she is a little dense to other peoples feelings- coughArchiecoughcough- and so I assume that like anyone she has little nicknames for her friends. Also, I'm trying to keep it somewhat real-life and so I just wondered how people would react to seeing a 'little girl' being carried around by 'sick, twisted men'. And Archie is a sweetie, or maybe there was more to his action than just a kind heart? Hm, think on that. I'll update as soon as I can ~Demenior

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-10-21

  Oxy Lady? Oh it's so bright! Noah? Gosh Demenior this is absolutly funny! I love how you worked in the point of view and thought of all the original names. And that Oxy-lady was sheer brilliance! And gosh I couldn't stop laughing when she saw Theresa and Jay and she thought, 'Bright'! I was literally laughing like a physco maniac! You said once before in a reviwe that you felt like your stories were too dark.. well not this one. YOu can write anything you set your mind too. Eagerly waiting for an update. -NuuoaEclaire

  Author's response

  Haha, thank you for your awesome feedback! The Oxy-Lady was meant to be a bit of a serious moment, but I guess Atlanta has a problem taking things seriously (Who actually does, besides Jay, in CotT?) The origional name sjust sort of popped up as I was writing. Noah came along becuse I didn't want to keep writing 'Herry, Neil, Odie and Archie' (in any combination) over and over again, so I just took their innitials and tried to re-arrange them into some fairly-readable word and was surprised to find out they spelled Noah!
  
  As for Oxy-Lady, I was going to have just someone asking if Atlanta was dieing or not, but then she got a bit more character and... I don't want to say too much in case I spoil anything. But she was fun to write, and she scares me a little too. Don't want to meet her in a dark alley, eh? Theresa and Jay? Who -wouldn't- expect them to have that kind of 'trying-to-be-secret-but-painfully-obvious-relationship'? And usually my stories have a very dark and complex theme, but this one is turning out to be a lot of fun to write, and even more surprisingly is that it's funny! Me plus humor usually equals impossible. Thanks for the encouragement and I'll get the next update up as soon as I can ~Demenior

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) kitkat1327 2006-10-22

  ha, ha, this is hilarious!
  ... unfortunatly I have no witty (witty is code name for lame) jokes this chapter, so
  UPDATE!!!

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) kitkat1327 2006-10-22

  ha, ha, this is hilarious!
  ... unfortunatly I have no witty (witty is code name for lame) jokes this chapter, so
  UPDATE!!!

• A Christmas Mission

  (#) kitkat1327 2006-10-22

  oops, I accidentally hit 'submit' twice

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