(#) AshleyChaotic 2006-10-30So, this chapter is by far my favorite.
Why you ask? I have two reasons why.
One] DIRTY IS IN IT!
Two] FUCKINALLY, Pete and Ev are starting to go somewhere. But I should really shut my mouth, because knowing miss Evie, she's gonna pull a stunt.
My favorite parts
/"If you weren't already so wrapped up in boy trouble, I'd so kiss you," I groaned and smacked his hands.
"Ok, that's enough, Joe,"/
Joe is too cute. I'm going to Joe's-R-Us to get me my own. I love how he's always the comical relief in this story.
/ "I'm staying here," he declared and I took a shaky breath before lifting my fingertips to my lips.
I couldn't tell what was running through my mind, because all I could picture was Pete and I, together.
Just like this./
Cute. Cute. Cute. You don't understand how badly I want those two together. She better pick the right person Ev. SHE BETTER.
I feel bad for Andy though. Don't get me wrong. But I'm glad he knows about the whole kissing thing, and I'm even more glad-er, that he found out from Evie.
Now with Patrick and Izzy.
You know how I feel about those two.
MAKE EM BANG ALREADY!
God dammit, they are made for eachother. Patrick needs to get over his shyness and be a manly man. And Miss Izzy needs to open her eyes and pull a move. I want them together. jrewbgbei.
Did I mention that I totally love the fact that Dirty was in this chapter? Yup.
Ew, my finger is bleeding.
But I keep typing.
That's true love right thur. haha.
- I MUST BEAT ASHLEY'S REVIEW OR MY LIFE WILL end*
*woops, i messed up and the caps was off and rog9ne3h0abh
hoyea, i have no quotes really, haha, so LETME GET SOME
"It was only two times," Andy widened his eyes, leaning forwards slightly.
"Two times?" he shook his head, taking a deep breath."
hahaha, GOOD JOB EVIE
"Then maybe I don't love you either," Andy looked back, and I saw the surprise.
"I couldn't tell what was running through my mind, because all I could picture was Pete and I, together.
Just like this."
cutest thing like.... ever?
I think so.
goshgoshogawrygee. I love this story with my life. idk, there is something about it that gets me excited and like idk. my emotions are running high just from a fuckload of words jumbled beautifully together to form orgasms.
wait did that make sense?
haha, sure. let's pretend it did.
aahhh. You said earlier this was better than the Lexi stories.
iiddkk. Lexi stories own so bad. But so does this. It ties. Real close.
but i wont tell you which is better :P
hoyea. well i must go, school tomorrow bllehhhh
runs off to eat trick or treat candy yumeh.
ohyea and "I LOVE YOU, UPDATE"
i mean, evie. wait your name is evie right?
yea, not update. haha, what was i thinking?????
oh god, joetroh must be slipping weed into my candy or something.
You just have no idea how much an update needed right now. Like, seriously. And ARE EVIE AND PETAH GOING TO CHITTYCHITTYBANGBANG OR WHAT?? You make it longgggggggggggggggggg. Like, urhhh.
-- Reading other reviews, I have to say ashley and SZ have like the funniest reviews ever. x]
"Patrick needs to get over his shyness and be a manly man. And Miss Izzy needs to open her eyes and pull a move. I want them together" - Agrees I CAN'T HELP IF I'M BLIND. IT'S NOT MY FAULT. =]
"And still mad at Izzy as usual..." - :o Thats freaking terrible. Cries Haha. Jk, but I'M SORRY! FORGIVE ME! >.>
See Evie? You're making me look bad.
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