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Jay Gazing
11 reviewsJay is confronted by Hera and begins to question his already blurry feelings. And Theresa can't be any more confused... or anymore hurt.
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The Cold Side of Heart
(#) Theresa599 2006-11-27
lol nice archies cooking nice but Hera can get stuck to a wall with a sword peirced though her heart and for Jay he can go to hell
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me evil i actullay don't like Hera in this one i really don't i don't even like Jay and he's my secound favorite charactorThe Cold Side of Heart
(#) citrus-lime 2006-11-27
hehe archies cooking and whats with jay and hera!?!?!?! they both can die!!!!! please write more!!! and j/t hook up please?The Cold Side of Heart
(#) iheartyou07 2006-11-27
shoves Hera and Jay to ground I want them to BOTH die. kick Jay's in the ribs, slaps Hera Hera is such a bitch, ugh. I can't believe he said all that to her, it was so sad. I hate cliffies, but this chapter was definitely worth the wait, and I'm positive so is the next one. I wonder what everyone's going to say when she gets back to the dorm... Can't wait. So you know you've got to update soon:D Btw, you killed me at the end when you told us it was Archie's cooking, lmao. Update soon!The Cold Side of Heart
(#) jekka10 2006-11-27
Ahh, no! NO! BAD HERA. I hope this gets all cleared up . :( Poor Theresa. And that moment with Archie's cooking is funny. :P
Is the same thing happening to you on fanfiction, it won't let me upload documents?Author's response
Yes, evil HERA! And it did happen to me actually. It is very annoying.The Cold Side of Heart
(#) Demenior 2006-11-27
xDD Archie's cooking can be head- and smelt- a mile away! BEWARE!
So, first thing I wan tot get off my chest, is hurrah! I'm not the only author (in my knowlage) that has made Hera a 'bad guy'. But I love how you've put her in charcater, trying to keep Jay safe (because we all know she secretly favors him more than anyone on the team) and keep the team together, but not wanting to explain the whole situation. Wonderful characterization.
And wow, I didn't expect Jay and Theresa to break up, well they were never really together, so soon. Good job though, Jay being all Jay-ish and pondering over words, and not living for his heart. I'm expecting to see (possibly) some Archie/Theresa moments and/or pairing, Jay/Atlanta comming up as well, and from what it seems, some Jay/OC.
I bet that OC will end up being Jay's fling, and he'll have to realize that all along Theresa wasn't there to drap him down, but grab his hand while he's falling.
Can't wait for the next installment.
~DemeniorAuthor's response
BEWARE! Lol. And yes it's true, we must band together to defeat the evil forces of Hera! I feel so happy now. You made my day with that comment. And yes Hera has slight obsession with Jay.
Well I wouldn't call it a break up... but yes it was early. Stupid Jay! Or Hera... not sure. Actually for pairings I have far too many to put... but I'll give away that I have no Archie/Theresa or Atlanta/Jay... but that is a good plan... hmmm.... ponders. As for the rest, you'll have to wait.
Oh that's a great idea too! Why didn't I think of that... hmph! But I have a different thing in mind. Great guess though.
Wow. I just gave a lot away. Oops. -NuuoaThe Cold Side of Heart
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-11-27
Archie's cooking made the big bang! That bit had me in a giant fit og giggles, Hera can be so evil sometimes, she annoys me more than Cronus at some points, same with Jay and not doing what he thinks is best and following his heartThe Cold Side of Heart
(#) ClassoftheTitans_fan 2006-11-30
HAHA! Archie..Archie, archie, archie, archie. lol
I DISLIKE HERA!!! Is it really Hera? Like wow! She sounds REALLy mean!! STUPID JAY!! LIKE what's his problem?? He better apologize to Theresa! And a really good apology! Poor Theresa...UPDATE SOON!!!
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