Categories > Celebrities > Panic! At The Disco > How to make Brendon Urie fall in love with you in 7 days
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-06ohh geee.
i am loving it!!
the plot idea is awesome :P
keep it up!
i love your writing :)
cant wait for a update.
(#) xxlaurenxx 2007-01-06i absolutly adore the story line. i do have to say tho, that's probably the only thing that draws me in. nothing more. your style or writing and deltail and deffinitly not the best. dont get me wrong tho, i still adore it. i jsut thought that maybe you'd want to get a review that you may actually find useful.
can't wait for an update
Author's responseWell I'm glad you like the story line and I'm srry if my writing style doesnt interest you!
- I love this story LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!^_^
- omg, I really love it! You got to write more now! :)
Author's responseThanks! an update should be coming up soon! but since I need some work on my editing skills, it may take awhile!
(#) Lillith_Thursday 2007-01-06I don't want to nit pick or anything but there are a lot of spelling and grammer errors. I don't want to sound like a bitch or anything because I love this story and I love the whole plot line for it. I could proof read for you if you'd like me too before you post it here. Leave me a message on here if you'd like. I would be glad to help if you want me to. I can't wait for the next part. :)
Author's responseI respect your opinion!Thanks! I know I probably do need to edit or whatever! But I'm srry if I'm not a professional writer and dont get ever little writing detail correct. But I'm still an amature to this, so plz bare with me.
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2007-01-07It's good but you really need to edit. You left a few words and left out alot of periods. And you used words that don't exist. And you used 'your' when it should be 'you're' and 'were' when it's 'we're'. Just saying. But other than that...It's good.
Author's responseThanks! I know I probably do need to edit or whatever! But I'm srry if I'm not a professional writer and dont get ever little writing detail correct. But I'm still an amature to this, so plz bare with me.
(#) xtearcatcherx 2007-01-07editttttt!!
But I still love you. :}
Thinking of the next chapter makes me all tingly inside.
Author's responseI'm you feel like that about my story!
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-08"Different? Don't say that, I mean that's what happens in every fan-fic I've read about us.
This was my favorite line! haha!
- So I now have the GREATEST respect for you since you made fun off all those Panic! fan-fics that all have the same "dramatic" plot. I don't know if you were intentionally trying to make fun of them but either way it made me SOO happy. Especially the sly comment about every girl brendon falls in love with always ends up falling in love with ryan. priceless. you are my hero!! haha
And Way to make a new and VERY interesting plot line! Props to you!!
Author's responsewow, i've never gotten a comment like this.
Well my story was in some parts intentionally suppose to be based on those ideas.
but i had to remember its just ficiton. Your one of the few ppl who reconginized that.
I try not to be too cliched.lol
I hate doing cookie cutters. different is what i strive for.
I've never been anyone's hero, but I'll take the postion.lol
You made me giggle when i read this.
you made me "=]"
really no joke.
I feel so moviated right now for the part 2.
Thanks for the review=]
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