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Forever Feels Like Home
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-25
Argh! There was so many things I wanted to rate this chapter! Moving, Exciting, Ambience, HOT!!! HELLO HOT DAMN HOT! Oh my god, it was so hot because of Katy! Ouch! Nahhh
Listen, on a serious note, this was a majorly fantastic chapter, I loved every word, you really did think about and thought about where you wanted to go, which meant that when Iz and Trix finally hooked up - it was just ok, there wasn't even a question of morals or loyalty that she'd just broken up with JB or Pete because her and Trix are perfect. And you wrote that scene perfect. Thank you. Thank you for dedictating it to me. You shouldn't have because it would have come any way - I just kicked u up the arse.Author's response
Hell, I wanted a Hot rating and I pondered to myself 'what would get me a hot rating? i know! more Katy.' There ya go!
This review is kick ass (arse) in the way that it takes my doubts and throws them out the window, so thanks for that. I wasn't sure how people would react to Izzy and Patrick hooking up so quickly after everything. I don't want them to be like "SLUT", but you make feel as though others won't see it quite that way. And this chapter needed to be dedicated to you because everyone needs to know where the kick in the arse (ass) came from.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-25
I knew sometime they would hook up. Patrick and her seem too close to be just friends. But she loves another. Poor Patrick. I loved it. I just don't know what I'm going to rate it. So many emotions.Author's response
It was definitely inevitable.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-26
aw, poor patrick. i have a feeling that he kind of knows what hes getting himself into though, so its also sort of 'awww patricky'. anyways, great update, you're the best, keep up the good work.Author's response
That's right "Awww Patricky...what are you doing?" I agree with that.
Thanks for the great review!
You are the best!
Smooches.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) riaryder 2007-04-26
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that was HOT.
I was desperate for them to get together. And in true CeCe fashion, it had to be surrounded by drama. I love it!She better not be thinking about breaking Patrick's poor little heart
The flashback at the beginning was great. You do that so well, reminding us of the good times with Pete and Izzy. They always make it understandable why she's clinging to the past with Pete.
Just wonderful, lady xAuthor's response
THANKS!!!!!!! Of course there has to be drama. That's what I do!
You are wonderful lady!
Smooches.Forever Feels Like Home
(#) MMMramen 2007-04-26
THANK YOU KATY!!!! And you too, CeCe. I needed an update. Badly. Since I can't seem to write anything worthy of the DoJ stamp of approval, I have to live vicariously through you. And I have to say FINALLY! I've been hoping for a Patrick/Izzy hookup. Now, I know you're the Grand-Dame of Drama-Rama, so I'm sure that meddlesome Pete and/or that delicious #18 will come strolling back into her life, BUT! I'm going to savor this. And give you a point.Author's response
First of all, don't even say that you can't write anything worthy of the DoJ stamp of approval because I long to write like you. End. Of. Secondly, thanks so much for this wonderous review! You savor the moment because I have a feeling that your feelings of drama to come are pretty accurate...just a thought.
Smooches!Forever Feels Like Home
(#) MMMramen 2007-04-26
Oh and I loved the appearance of Katy and how motherly she was. She seems like the maternal type who would hug you and tell you everything's going to be just fine...and then she'd call you a wanker. Loved it!Author's response
Yes, that is our beloved Katy!Forever Feels Like Home
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-30
"HEY! Get a tent, would ya?" Joe asked from the other side of the dock. -> Ah, Joe. sighs
The whole dock/ water incident made me think of Friday, 13th. ;)
"Well, he certainly is even more scrumptious looking in person," Katy said crossing her legs as she sat on my bed. -> Ah, Katy. sighs
AH, CECE! sighs** Das chapter war very exciting, hot, moving, etc, etc. I'm a sucker for boys longing for girls for years without ever making an actual move on her. That's what movies do to you: They corrupt your brain.Author's response
Ah, Alex! sighs
I fully agree with you that movies corrupt your brain, but I'm a sucker for them along with boys longing for girls for years without ever making an actual move too. What can ya do?
Thanks for the review. You pick out the best parts of my story! I love you for that among other amazing things ;)
Smooches.
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