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• Empty house not heart

  (#) xharlequingirl 2007-05-06

  This is a fantastic piece of art. You are an amazing writer. I can not even find the words to describe it. ♥

  Author's response

  My first review again! Thank you soo much for your continued support. Reading this so quickly after i posted helped. Thank you.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-05-06

  that was so amazingly sad, i mostly want to cry right now. you have a great style, i enjoy it alot.

  Author's response

  Im sorry, i didn't intend to invoke tears! But thank you soo much for reading and reviewing. This means soo much to me. I was really starting to lose faith in my writing. SO if you really enjoyed it that is all i could ask for. Thank you.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) fobgal1 2007-05-06

  I loved it.
  I love Patrick stories, and this one is amazing.
  Don't give up just because no one is reviewing.
  No one reviews my stories and I still post them.
  So please don't give up.
  Update soon.

  Author's response

  I am soo incredibly shocked and happy this story is being so well received. It is amazing. Thank you for reviewing. I tend not to write Patrick stories. Figuring he is one of the most beloved subject matters, Most of my stories have Joe as the main character and a few it is Pete.
  
  It has been so hard to write new stories when no one reviews. I was on this site months ago and when i would post instantly people would review and it was amazing. I was gone for months and now i feel like eithe my writing has decreased in value or no one cares enough.
  
  I went on rambling i;m sorry. Thank you soo much for reviewing and like you told me. Don't give up.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-06

  I loved it. Of course I love Patrick stories. Don't get discouraged over lack of reviews. Hope you turn this into a longer story. If not it was great. Even made me tear up. :)

  Author's response

  Aww i did not mean to cause any tears!! I'm sorry. Thank you for the support though and thank you for reading and reviewing. People keep asking for this to be longer and so i am contemplating what I could do. Thank you again.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-05-08

  This was a great one shot and I'll be telling my doojies about this too so they can come read and review too. xxxx

  Author's response

  Aww, thank you soo very much. That definitely means a lot to me that my story would be good enough to tell someone about. Eveyrone keeps asking for more, and for this to be made longer. So i am going to see what i can do. Keep an eye out. ;)

• Empty house not heart

  (#) rejected_smurf_god 2007-06-08

  This sounds really good. At first I was thinking the girl died but you surprised me there. Keep writing.

  Author's response

  Thank you. Hmm you're the first person who thought the girl had died but i could see how you could have thought that. There is seven more chapters after this one, and more to come. I hope you get the chance to read them all. Thank you soo much.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) xxxmusikluverxxx 2007-09-26

  This is a great story. So far i've only read 1 chapter, but it is amazing. I feel like what Patrick is feeling in your story. I feel his sorrow and loss. I love reviewing stories, i know how good it makes the author feel. It makes authors feel like their story is wanted and i enjoyed that too, but one of my stories on a different site didn't get any reviews for a long time and i never had the interest to pick it up. Im glad that i can at least review your awesome story!!!!

• Empty house not heart

  (#) PatbtrthnPete 2008-06-08

  Your writting is amazing. I almost cried...you made that real...

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