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• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Vulkan 2007-05-29

  A great start. Looks like fast paced too.
  
  One suggestion, please dont use any known characters for pairing. Use someone intelligent and obscure like some unknown Ravenclaw or a Slytherin or even Katie Bell or Alicia Spinnet.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) madengineer 2007-05-30

  a bit fast paced..seems like brainstorming result rather than a plot....also stretching "mind magic" to extreme....
  
  will have to wait for couple of more chapters before seeing where this is headed.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Arrin 2007-05-30

  Off to an alright start, one thing I want to warn you about is to watch out for having Harry learn TOO fast.
  
  I like the idea of you using Fem!Blaise or Daphne Greengrass for your pairings, there's hardily enough of thoes around and if you manage to pull it off nicely, I'll be chuffed.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Kath 2007-05-31

  HI! you could add Hermione and Tonks, and it wouyld be PERFECT!!!
  
  Update ASAP
  Cheers*

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) jabarber69 2007-05-31

  Hey been trying to read this for a couple of days but I dont know this site been overloaded or something and kept getting error message. Okay as to the review, good story, very interesting grabbing summary and so far interesting plot and mostly well written. I will definitely look forward to further chapters.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) slashslut 2007-06-01

  good start. lookoing forward to seeing how it develops!

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-06-01

  I am looking forward to reading more. I can't wait for the next chapter.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) jsdailey 2007-06-02

  h/hr is always a good choice. good luck with the rest of the story.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) MiFo71 2007-06-08

  Great work so far, makes me hungry for more. As for pairings, -- just as an idea for you, use or not -- try Daphne Greengrass, leave Fleur with Bill W., and have Harry hounted by Fleurs 'little ' Sister Gabrielle who's had her puberty growth spurt, and give her a prominent saying (eg: But I wanna taste 'arry's seed!) or an other striking trait.
  Thanks for the read. I'll follow the story.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Hippogriff818 2007-06-10

  I LOVE IT!!! This is absolutlely brillant!! I don't even know why I like it so much because it just started!!! Please update soon and a Harry/multiple is also a great idea!!! And please make one of them Harry/Female Blaise, they are really hard to find and a Harry/Daphne, thise would be great!!! I hope you also include more Slytherins'!!! This story is on my favorites and alert list!!!! Rating:10/10 :)

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