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The Magical School of MogenHeld
34 reviewsBeginning of the summer Moody gives Harry many magical books that start our Wizarding hero on his adventure. Then he leaves the Dursley's to stay at Grimauld place but finds out about Sirius's will...
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The Magical School of MogenHeld
(#) Arkarian23 2012-04-25
An interesting start, if a bit dull, though it is only the introductory chapter. I'm not liking the style of writing, I feel this is due to some poor spelling and what feels like misuse of tenses. I'm not sure how you were writing this but some work, rereading is needed, never assume that a word processor will spot and correct all your mistakes.The Magical School of MogenHeld
(#) zaxxon 2012-10-16
Very interesting start of a story. I wish you would continue with it.The Magical School of MogenHeld
(#) jabbazrulez 2013-07-05
nice start! Fleur sounds good as do Fem!blaise and Daphne. maybe tracy davis too? look forward to more!
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