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• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) martialwolf 2007-09-10

  So far it seems good, but it is only the first chapter. Keep it up and you will have a good story. I have always been fond of the harry/hermione pairings, for some reason, I just really don't like the thought of her with anyone else, or just mention it in passing. If you want a harem, put in Fleur/Tonks/Greengrass

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Huntresss 2008-01-15

  I like the direction of this story so far but would caution you against a harem story... they just devolve into a sex fest and loose the grip of the story that you've started. Which reads to me so far to be a more independent and very powerful Harry who will be willing to buckle down and learn what he needs to to win. ( or may even find out he doesn't need to win just to get one of the two lords to loose ) If you like Fleur let he be Harry's love interest cause to be honest I hate Ginny and HErmione as partners for him (thats one reason i read a lot of slash) let him meet up with her at the Bank...and go from there.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) hlestea 2008-02-29

  Very good so far, I hope to be able to read more soon.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) jacoc9453 2008-04-30

  update (the u's and a's are long so streach theme out like jfk on clone high.) please

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Lord_Sia 2009-01-13

  I agree with the others. Good story, if a bit clicheed. You would do well with a beta to check for those pesky little errors and annoying repetitions. I believe that it would be better to have Harry go through all of the memories while sorting them; if he's supposed to have eidetic memory after learning the art, shouldn't that be how you learn what to hide, how to suppress emotions, thoughts and memories, how to face your fears and stuff?
  On the subject of pairings, I agree; if you write Ginny as anything other than the submissive/masochistic footstool/punchbag from "Crack'd Mirror" (great lemon-fic, BTW, if a bit sickening due to certain events that are amusing, but nauseating...), I will stop reading. Hermione... No, can't really see it. Or rather, I can, but she would SO crimp his style, dude. I've read stories with Daphne, Tracey and Co with varying degrees of success, it's mainly about how you write them. I love Luna Lovegood though, Gabrielle Delacour is hot (although she might be a bit young, pendinghow you write it) and recently I read some good stuff with Su Li. She's a minor character, and there's a lot of room for creativity. Plus, I've always had a weakness for the asian school-girl... Gah! Bad thoughts, bad thoughts, naughty thoughts, need cold shower...
  Overall, pretty nice fic, I hope you'll keep it up.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Marauder05 2009-05-05

  Intriguing story.Oh,about doing FemBlaise or Daphne Greengrass,how 'bout adding both of them.I never read any story with he both of them in it.I can't ait to see what happens next.Till next time.Ja Ne XD

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Wicket 2009-08-28

  This is a really goos start. you shouls write more. i'm sure you won't regret it.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) spaceodin 2009-10-09

  good start.. make it multi nad make fluer/daphne/luna three of them. my favorites of course.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) Zucht 2011-02-27

  I realy enjoyed this firwst chapter and am looking forward to more. I wouldn't mind you adding Daphne Greengrass or Hermione but also would probably stop reading if Ginny shows up as more than Ron's little sis. Her character has always been saltpeter to my reading enjoyment.

• The Magical School of MogenHeld

  (#) stag 2011-11-03

  nice work. more please

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