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Surprise, Surprise
13 reviewsHarry Potter is aware of the wizarding world. The only problem is he grew up apart from it. When he explored the magical world, he found dangers, wonders, and friendship.
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Second Fiddle
(#) Nautilus 2007-11-12
well that didn't turn out as i expected, but this is probably a more realistic version. though i don't see how the village was cleared so quickly, surely it would take malfoy less time then a village?
congrats, and where is home?Author's response
The villagers are in deep shit for a long time. For them, Harry as a living legend is too good to be true.Second Fiddle
(#) jabarber69 2007-11-12
Hey what the f**k! You've been building up forever and ever about him being a twilight wolf and then right when he has the chance to find out and prove it you go and have him wimp out. What's the hell point of this story then!?!Author's response
Confronted with unknown power and dragged along by events, it was not an uncommon reaction.Second Fiddle
(#) Skoell 2007-11-12
great new chapters!!
interesting twist with no werewolf believing in harry and harry being wanted by the ministry...i can't wait to see how it will go on!!
interesting how neville is made the hero again although harry was the main part of their escape closely followed by tonks...
if you pair harry, maybe put him together with hermione AND tonks...it doesn't have to be heavy romance and stuff like this....Author's response
Hope the new updates gave you some answers. There will be Harry/Hermione in the next story.Second Fiddle
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-11-12
Excellent update, as usual, even though this chapter seemed to have a lot of filler. The significant thing seems to be the fact that Scrimgeour and the others are walking into a trap, but there's not much else to discuss. Hopefully Harry will see Hermione again in the next chapter, we've been missing out on their interactions for far too long.Author's response
There isn't going to be any interaction between Harry and Hermione in this story, as you well know. There will be one in the next story.Second Fiddle
(#) alec_potter 2007-11-13
awesome chapter...but am missing the harry-hermione interactions now....n i hope harry n nev b'com frds soon....interesting twist...make the story exiting to read. i was reading about ministers plan for potters, can't potters get the fact that harry fought voldermort and he helped free bones be brought to press's notice...it wont be that hard to convince rita. And they could bring in some pressure...i know u already hve a plot line thought off...but wanted to suggest it anyways. good going. Update soon.Author's response
Thanks for the plot outline. I'll keep it my when I write the third story.Second Fiddle
(#) dexterz 2007-11-20
bloody brilliant thats what it is...keep up the good work and update soonAuthor's response
I try my best, including updating sooner.Second Fiddle
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-11-25
OK, I have to say that this chapter was absolutely unbelievable. You bring Harry to a werewolve village where he's revealed as a twilight wolf, and then the whole village says, "We don't believe you." Rather than have him transform and prove his case you walk it off with a bit of sarcasm. Bad form, really. It's more of a delaying tactic than anything else. You have a claim that Harry beat the Dark Lord in a duel but again no witnesses and a claim of "Believe me! I heard it from a friend who was supposedly there." I hope that the story clears up in the next coming chapters.
Geovanni LucianoAuthor's response
Harry hasn't mastered his gift yet. Hopefully, the next chapters answered some of your questions.Second Fiddle
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-11-29
Good chapter but Harry needs to get with the program.
gunnyAuthor's response
Hopefully the new updates gave you the answer.Second Fiddle
(#) lycus 2007-12-27
I really love this story,but we need more harry and hermione. and it's good that harry is taking some time to himself back at the farm. but I really want to see the ministry fall flat on it's face when it's proven that harry is not a werewolf, and I hope that harry can get along with his brother and sister, and as for ron and neville they are both jealous prats who don't like harry beacause he doesn't fall all over himself in the presence of TBWL and his sidekick. but it would be great to have a harry and hermione reunion soon with snogging involved in front of ron. and as for harry avoiding the spotlight that is just a harry trait especally as it concerns magic, and in that area his confidence is low, and by the way please please update.Author's response
Well, any hope of pairing dies with Harry in this story. But, in the next story, there will be Harry/Hermione moments.Second Fiddle
(#) TheYanger 2008-04-06
ok i like this story but you make harry such a fucking wimp, seriously you let everyone walk all over him and make him have to defend himself at every turn and yet he doesn't get angry? Come on now an person no matter how level headed would have went off on ron and neville sooner. The plot and the storylines are great but your characters are weak and uninteresting they have no depth you don't feel that neville is anything but a tool or that ron is an idiot, or lily is just a "constant" victim. I had actually hoped for a new update but saw none and reread the whole story and it just made me go wtf all over again. I want to like this story so much more but you just make it difficult to take anything in it remotely seriously. You are killing it with the constant harry bashing by everyone and never having harry defend himself, why is he bashed constantly yet no one points out the others flaws and seriously susan bones is a bitch in this story a person like her is not a person no person with any decent values would place one innocent life over another. I'm ranting a bit but i guess if you think this is a good way to keep writing then you need to rethink writing. Your story has become redundant, harry goes off alone, gets into a trouble, everyone shits on harry, he miracalously escapes repeat.Author's response
I like to show my readers that the characters are evolving as the story progressed. Hopefully, you'll keep on reading my story to see if there has been transformation on my characters, or plot.
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