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36 reviewsHarry Potter and the Marvel Universe. 5 year old Harry accompanies the Dursleys on a Business trip to Stark International, where an industrial accident kills all of Harry's living relatives. A very...
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Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) BARON1941 2007-12-09
Thank you for doing a haary potter story with my favorite marvel hero tony stark this is the first crosss of these characters that i have seen and so far i am loving it.I cannot wait to see harry and tony's reaction to finding out the prophecy somehow i don't think they are going to be to happy with dumbles also i can't see tony and co. letting harry face the dark lord alone.All in all a most excellent start to a story.please do not forget about acts of betrayal it is my favorie story around right now with this one a close second.Author's response
The prophecy won't be important (if there is one) until 4th year...
- Harry most specifically will not be alone when facing any dark lords, though the help he askes for might be surprising.
- My other stories are coming along, I just had to get this one written down so that it would leave me alone.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) stealacandy 2007-12-09
I think you meant to write "shmok", not "schmoe".
Shmok means a penis, or, in the context you mean it, "prick".
Author's response
schmoe is a dialectic variant of schmuck, and both mean penis.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) kmac23va 2007-12-09
Great start, and while it took me a second to recognize the reference, I'm glad you're using Power Pack as well. One of the few series I have all of, and as many subsequent specials as possible (so I've seen Julie evolve into the teenager with the crop top version of her Lightspeed outfit in Runaways), as well as Alex in New Warriors. Given the timeframe, would this be during the original Pack series, though, or just after? (Since they flipped powers, you could do Julie with the mass power to be different :) ) I look forward to more, along with the rest of your stories.Author's response
I used the Pack because (a I like the Pack and (b they were the only pre-teen heroes running around at the time (excepting Alex of course) Julie would have been 12 just as their first series ended, so that's what I'm using... Not that the Powers will be making all that many appearances as Julie's main role is 'the girl he left behind' and a source of jealousy for Hermione and Padma...Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) onelost 2007-12-09
Fun. A very original cross over. I suspect it will become a "new" story very quickly. (In that will diverge from the original very quickly.)
BTW recheck your spelling. I've found reading the article or story backwards helps me catch the mistakes my fingers make.
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(#) BARON1941 2007-12-09
The prophecy won't be important (if there is one) until 4th year...
exactly how many years is this story going to cover(i love long stories)and how long to you foresee this story being?Author's response
Well, in theory, an education at Hogwarts takes seven years...Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) matt101 2007-12-09
Great start to the story. The stupid rating system wouldn't let me pick a good rating only the bad ones were click able. Can't wait for the next chapter.Author's response
Thank youHarry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) OdinMage 2007-12-09
I have liked most of your work that I've read so far.... that said, I LOVE this.... I'm hoping you can focus mainly on this, while still throwing the odd chapter out to your other stories....
Keep up the good work!Author's response
By necessity the two stories that are winding up need first priority, but I've got almost a thousand words on the next chapter of technomage done.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) lufio 2007-12-10
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Ah, good. The "Legend
Of Baby Harry" can use
A kick in the pants.
-[ A humorous skewering of the story of baby Harry's survival against Riddle's Killing Curse can be a lot of fun. I hope you'll continue the trend with other things as well. ]-Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) Kitsune-Taishou 2007-12-10
Neat5 story, do you plan on giving harry a player like his father of is he going to have many women at the same time, also will get in touch with any slytherin females, and finally how will Flitwick answer Hayy's question?Author's response
Harry's only eleven, I'm sure he'll date as much as possible, but he's the type to wear his heart on his sleeve...Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) amysds 2007-12-10
awesomeness and coolness all wrapped up! Very original - just be careful cause not all of us are up on all these marvel people youre throwing at us! I had to look up tony sparks on marvel . com ! Which goes to show how interesting your story is that I bother looking for the faces of the characters...Author's response
- thats why I'm only dropping names, their history and faces don't really matter to the story, though it is more fun when you can picture the armor and other costumes.
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