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Room of Requirement
(#) DavidMPotter 2008-06-22
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more. BRAVORoom of Requirement
(#) BJH 2008-06-23
You wanna know what I really like about htis story?
You've taken a premise that would give you an amusing little voyeauristic PWP story and actually put some significant depth to it.
Harry didn't just fall into Marrietta's head and go along for the ride, he learned something of the depth of human emotions.
Harry didn't just realize Hermione was hot and try to nail her, he is drawn to her for herself as well as her body and wants more than just PWP.
Angelina does more than just snog Harry for his help, she feels something for him and is torn between giving him what he wants, as well as the closeness he deserves, and feeling guilt over using him and pity for him for being used by so many people.
Really well done.
BJHRoom of Requirement
(#) Beriothien 2008-06-24
You sir, are the king of writing realisticly.
Any teenage-boy would have taken it further? That would be Harry's emotions to bring that forth, and he usually keeps those in a closet, so he's slowly coming forth with them. And you write that fantastically.
Now I want some real smut from you with the way you write.
Please update soon!
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(#) Loki-L 2008-06-24
Is this a censored or cut version of the story? I think I remember there being more to it and it being more explicit in parts. Why the cut? Is the uncut version still available somewhere?Author's response
The original version was more of pwp smut fic and had too many errors to make into a real story. When I went back through and fixed the writing I also calmed the content down. The intent is the same, just lowered the rating so I could also post it at Fanfiction.net.
After I post the next chapter of this and Unknown Memories, hopefully next week, I plan on going back and making the ficwad and aff version's more Adult again.Room of Requirement
(#) kurotatsu72 2008-07-01
One thing I noticed that no one's mentioned yet...
Not only did Gryffindor utterly humiliate Slytherin, not only did they run them into the ground, but the fight between Malfoy, Harry and the twins...never happened.
Which means (for now, at least) no excuse for Umbitch to ban Harry and the twins from Quidditch.
Now that's Epic Win.
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