- ah! ^^^^ she beat me^^^^
I dont have the first review! nooooooo... okay fine. I wont pout about it...(much)
I liked this chapter. I read it twice actually. Once alone and once to Robby and Im glad I read it again. I picked up on somethings I didnt notice the first time through. And instead of babbling on and then letting r go Im just gonna blend his comments in with mine kay?
I think its interesting how she was excited at the beginning. for them coming home and all. I mean like she was still pissed and judging on what happened at the end of the chapter her and mikey hadnt talked or made up or anything so I think it showed a lot that she was excited for him to come home. Sorta like theyre family. she can love and bitch with him and be mad but she still thinks of him as her family. She luvs him!!!
I liked the first section. it was your typical style of writing, where skylar misunderstands or causes a misunderstanding and then babbles her way through it making it worse instead of better. Thats just her. She will always be like that.
But what was different about this chap. was that you had these bits woven into it. Like serious comments that I didnt really pick up on first. I mean the first time through they seemed like witty comments, but soooo witty. they were like bleh witty comments. not her usual spunk. but re reading it I saw a lot more depth to them. like the one about liz not cutting Mikeys hair... I mean sky really thinks liz and gee are a couple and its killing me that we (the readers) dont know if thats true or not!!! gah.
and this one-the more I tried to help Mikey out, the more I dragged him down with me.
The story of my life, I thought sadly.
OMG. that is such a sad line!!! I mean its blended in so well I didnt realize how sad it was at first. I mean poor sky. she really feels responsible for gee and she shouldnt!! he made those choices. not her. Shes turning the blame on to herself here and its fucked up!
I loved how when she got pissed at mikey to she was all Frankies the shit! I mean that was so childish! but it was real and I loved it!
As for the lawyer thing- what the hell!! Santa billed gerard? are you kidding me?! gah. that pisses me off.
makes me think that like theres something else going on that she dont know about.
I liked how Mikey covered for her with it a little. Which makes me think that maybe gee dont know she was out on a date thing. Cause before I said frank would tell ray who would tell bob who would tell mikey who would tell gee and blah blah blah, but now i think no.
I mean if mikey didnt tell him about the lawyer cause hes trying to 'protect' him then theres no way he told him sky was out on a 'date'/
And last. Im glad that Alessa is moving in. I mean does that mean that when mikey goes back on tour that alessa will stay with sky?? keep her company? I mean she needs a friend. I know she has all those other people but you can never have too many friends. and friends are one thing but roomates are another,
ooooh she can always go find johnie!! hes homeless! he'd move in. I bet if she cleaned him up they could **** nvrmind...
Author's responseI don't know on what to respond first, I mean you pick up on so many things and even though you know pretty much the rest, there are shit that is planned ahead that you don't know about and I don't want to ruin it for you.
So umm want pie?
- I love how she said she would "blend" my comments in and then not let me get a word in edgewise.
I really do not have much to add except to point out the fact that three quarters of the page down Sklar refers to Mikey as a "stupid fairy".
Now proper etiquette would dictate that term as socially unacceptable would it not? In fact did she just not throw a tantrum over the use of that word two chapters back? But its okay for her to use it out of anger? Please clarify.
Although I suppose calling him a stupid horse is better then lets say a...goose?
You do know Im just busting your balls here Jade. Mostly cause when Elle said the chapter was named 'threesome' I was expecting something different
Author's responseThis is not your kinda story. lol. I suggest you look something up at fuckaroundtheclockstories.net
- okay okay I know youre gonna totally kick my ass for this, but whatever.
Im starting a new story.
its called 'you can keep my whore' heres an excerpt from it.
My arms were still around the Mikey wannabe, and if that's Mikey then who's trying to molest me?
"Mikey?", I whispered.
The person behind me stroked their hand down my back.
"Mikey?", I repeated.
"Mmm Skyler", he moaned against the back of my neck.
Oh my god, he felt so good.
"Skyler?", the person I was holding stirred, it..I mean she? Well she had a girls voice therefore I called her a she...
Way to go, Mikey! Bringing chicks to bed! He finally got the hang of the whole rock & roll lifestyle!
So I did grab a girl and not Mikey! And Mikey touched me! How fucking amazing!
The girl sounded really familiar so I took a crazy shot, "Alessa?"
"Skyler?", she examined, "Mikey!"
Mikey scrambled to switch on the light and we gawped around, Alessa was still in my arms, we looked at one another and then at Mikey, he looked back, looking like a kid on Christmas morning. And why wouldn’t he. Alessa had snuggled up tighter against me and slowly brushed the hair from my neck.
"Mikey…you think she might…?" Alessa giggled.
"Might what?", I unwrapped my arms from her, I knew what it looked like. I had only come in to see Mikey. Could she be saying what I thought she was saying?
"So this is a regular thing? –you and Mikey?", Alessa sat up too.
"Yeah but I didn't know you were here", I explained, feeling the blush take over my cheeks.
"So what if she is", Mikey shrugged.
"What?", I gasped, "You don't want me to leave?"
"How could we?", Alessa cooed at me.
"Sure!", Mikey smiled at me.
hahaha. Robby was really upset there was no action in it, so I rewrote it for him!
go head and ban me anytime. I understand...
Author's responseYou're a certified perv, I hope you know it. lol you and your Robby.
- ahh mikey's back!! and alessa, too! the beginning was just hilarious. i read it so many times and it just got funnier. now when mikey's back they're sort of forced to talk things over. they can't ignore each other when they live together, can they? ok maybe then can, but atleast in this chappie they didn't. which was awesome. i'm glad mikes doesn't seem to be as furious as he was when they last saw each other. and even though mikey does have a point, i'm still mad at him for taking sides. that's stupid and childish and immature and unnecessary; something skyler would do, not mikey.
i feel pretty hopeful right now, about a lot of things.
first, mikey's back so maybe skyler will find out about gerard and liz. i still refuse to think that they'd really be a coupple. they probably got even closer during the tour but they cannot be married. or engaged, or anything like that at all. i swear there's gonna be bodies if they are. maybe sky and mikey will talk and somehow the subject will come up.
2- gerard's back. i don't know if they're ever gonna solve their problems but if so, now's the time. she has got to talk to him before they head back on tour. she has to be the 'brave' one and pick up the phone and ask him to meet her somewhere so they can talk. cause gerard already did that, altough we'll never find out exactly why he called, maybe he called to solve things, maybe he had another reason. however, thanks to billy making a face we'll never find out and gerard probably won't call again. it's nto like billy's the bad guy, i really appreciate that he took care of sky and shit but telling gerard not to call skyler and then trying to completely block gerard AND the rest of the guys from sky's life, well bleh, that was just stupid. he should get ripped apart by scary little garden gnomes who like to use human guts as scarfs when the temperature's low. what can i say, i definitely hold a grudge against billy.
3- frankie's back! skyler's very own personal sunshine. and after everything she's gone through, the angry times, the sad times, the pathetic times, the reckless and stupid times, well, she could use a little sunshine in her life right now, right..?
Author's responseWell it's funny how people expect Sky to be the stupid kid, yet Mikey ended up being the one who picked sides.
And I was lol-ing so hard at the human guts as scarves!
You are either a very funny chick! Or a very evil funny chick!
(#) -MyChemicalRomance 2008-01-10best story on ficwad tbh
but please write more.
gerard and skyler HAVE to sort things out and get married and have kids.
oh and liz should get hit by a bus and die lol.
Author's responseImagine the irony if Liz gets hit by my chem's tour bus?! lol!
- Yay for Mikey being back!
The scene at the beginning of this chapter was so funny!
Poor Mikey. lol.
If Sky can tell Mikey she is still totally in love with his brother, but she won't tell Gerard? Grr.
But if Mikey's back that means Frank is too, and Gerard!
Frank is just the person Sky needs right now.
And I agree with Cranium ^^ I won't believe that Liz and Gerard are a couple.
Author's response28298302 chapter and you still don't know how Skyler operates? lol.
It's never sorting shit, it's all about stirring more crap.
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