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Fools Rush In
(#) DrT 2008-03-31
Now that was an enjoyable and original chapter!
"T"Author's response
Thank you, although I have no idea what chapter you were referring to!Fools Rush In
(#) Cateagle 2008-03-31
-ROLF- Ohh, I loved that chapter and all the games Monster played. Clearly Harry is blessed with most intelligent familiars (somehow I don't think Dumbles et al. will consider it a blessing, but that's their worry). Methinks it's going to be quite an interesting summer for Harry and lead to a very interesting next year at Hogwarts.Fools Rush In
(#) foolishwandwaver 2008-03-31
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. while the premisis is familiar, the details are quite original. Love Monster. Also that Seamus and Dean are primary characters. I get sooooo tired of Hermione saving the day!Author's response
Yes, I read a few of them and then decided to write my own. There are plenty of cliches but hopefully enough originality and not so many cliches as to make it intolerable. Seamus and Dean are only primary characters for now, that will change as my little plot unfolds. Not to worry, while there will not be huge amounts of Hermione-bashing she will by no means be saving the day. Thanks for the review.Fools Rush In
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-03-31
Very fun chapter here, Monster's a hit with me, and really enjoying the character of Grammy a lot, and going to be interested to see what further role she might play in this, considering she's not a fan of AWPBDumbldore at all. Also fun to see two guys, Dean and Seamus get some more playtime, considering almost nothing was did with them in canon, it'll be fun to see what all they get into. Hope to see some of the ladies show up in the future. Great stuff here!Author's response
Grammy will definately play a large role in the next chapter but will only be a bit character after that I'm afraid. I have plenty of other crazies all lined up for your delectation in future chapters instead! For the while it will mostly be the male characters having a central role but there shall be more female characters later on. Thanks for the reviewFools Rush In
(#) Ender_Wiggin 2008-04-01
Excellent Story! You've taken a very common theme and gave your twist in a extremely humorous way. Even though I may have nightmares of the elderly propositioning after this chapter, I can say that I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!Author's response
Yes, it's chock full of cliches, even if I do subtly parody a few. Now you don't have to lie about your love for elderly people, we're all friends here. I write far shorter chapters for fanfiction.net (under the same name) and double them up here, so if you're really eager to read more the next chapter is already up on fanfiction. Cheers.Fools Rush In
(#) slashslut 2008-04-05
i love the sarcastic wit and clever twists on cliche plot elements in this fic. and THANK YOU for including characters other than ron and hermione!!!Fools Rush In
(#) slashslut 2008-04-05
love the sarcastic wit in this story! and THANK YOU for including characters other than ron and hermione!Author's response
You are most welcome, they will not play a large role until near the end of this book or if it's too long they won't appear til a possible sequal. I must warn you that there will be no slash in this book, but I may be judging you by your name....thanks for the review :)Fools Rush In
(#) Elfwyn 2008-04-16
A wonderful original story. I giggled throughout it. Monster was great, the stinking boy smell wonderful and the shear amount of charms on Harry forseeable. What is to stop someone in that world from tracing anyone? Your point about how Harry should have been given his houselife before Hogwarts was always something I thought overlooked, why would someone change so much? Can't wait for more.Author's response
I'm so very sorry about my incredibly late reply, but thank you for your lovely review. Yes I always thought there were many gaps in the cannon I could exploit for my story. Hope you like the newer chapters :)Fools Rush In
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-06-29
Harry should sue Dumbledore for what he has done to Harry.Author's response
Why yes, yes he should!
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