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• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-10-14

  I loved it and i didn't think it was rushed. You write them both so well and there's a true compassion between them. I love how they are both so unsure but when the moment felt right they just went for it.
  
  Honestly Neve, this was really good and best of all you continue to write with humour and i'm always laughing. Fab :)
  
  But oh no, what's going to happen now?

  Author's response

  That was a huge sigh of relief, thanks moonpig. You reviewed so quickly.
  
  I know what happens next - will it be good or will it be bad, enquiring minds wanna know. lol
  Sorry i've just been watching The Lost Boys :)
  
  I'm hoping to post the next chapter by the weekend.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-14

  Wow thanks for updating so soon!!
  
  aaaaaah i loved it!
  
  congratulations on "the sex scene"! i'm glad they did, it wasn't too rushed. particularly as they are going to be separated for a while now.
  
  i just think they are an adorable couple. i love how you write them
  
  thanks very much and can't wait for the next update!
  
  

  Author's response

  Thanks so much, it's amazing how difficult it is to write a scene like that. It's like "whoops can't write that" and "mm need to find a different word for that" lol.
  
  So pleased you liked the update and thank you for reviewing.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-10-14

  OMFG....FINALLY THEY HAD SEX! doing the happy dance...lol....MORE i love it!

  Author's response

  LOL, you are so funny. Glad to liked it :)

• Deadlines

  (#) easykeys 2008-10-14

  This was fucking hot!
  
  I agree with moonpig, there is deffo lots of emotion between the two and I think its great they waited this long for when they were both ready.
  
  You write everything so well and its so descriptive! Fab chapter, can't wait for more.
  
  Although I'm sad for when Jill goes home, if she does
  
  More soon plzzzzz
  
  dondon xo.

  Author's response

  Yeah you thought it was hot. hurrah.
  I'm so pleased you like Jill and Bob.
  
  You know my English teacher once told me that i was rubbish at creative writing and description, so you made my day. THANK YOU.

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-10-14

  I love your writing style, you give so much attention to detail and pacing. nothing about this (or any chapter for that matter) felt rushed.
  
  IT FINALLY HAPPENED! so happy. it is about time.
  
  It was also nice how you gave a whole chapter to just Jill and Bob, that they had some alone time with no one else around.
  
  great job, and thanks for updating so soon!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much for such a lovely review. Bob and Jill definatley deserved their own chapter. I'm so happy everybody seems to think this was the right time for them. I wanted to sneak it in and let it be a surprise but i had to rate the chapter so that didn't work.
  
  Thank You :)

• Deadlines

  (#) PinkFairy 2008-10-15

  Hi, I am going to be so gutted when you finsih this story. its good to watch 2 people fall in love.

  Author's response

  Hi again, thanks for taking the time to leave such a cool review.
  
  Don't worry there is still lots of drama for Jill and Bob ahead.
  
  Oh yeah and Mikey, and Gerard, and Frank and can't forget about the lovely Ray :))

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-17

  Hi there Neve,
  
  That was so exciting and I loved all the little details, like the first elevator scene and after how they just held each other.
  
  I loved the end how he picked her up and took her into the shower.
  
  I loved the spontenaity (?)of the moment. I really love this pairing.
  
  So looking forward to more.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much Moonshyne. It really means alot when you leave a review. I just hope you like the next update :)

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