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• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-19

  Hi there Neve,
  
  This was so sad at first when they both misunderstood each other's intentions.
  
  But it ended exciting with Bob going after Jill.
  
  And always that element of comedy with Ray and Frank trying to stop Worm from getting Bob.
  
  Great update as usual.

  Author's response

  I kind of think Jill and Bob are so similar in ways. Neither just shouting out loud and asking what's up with the other.
  
  I'm so pleased you liked the Frank/Ray/Worm bit. Lol

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-19

  Hi Neve,
  
  If you have three reviews from me it's because ficwad is messing up.
  
  But here it goes yet again.
  
  I loved it and felt so sad when Bob and Jill had the misunderstanding. I can see how Bob could be so hurt whne he felt she wasn't even going to say goodbye to him.
  
  I also felt Jills pain when he was cold and unfeeling, but she did seem to recognize that he looked hurt so hopefully that will bode well for him.
  
  I loved how in the end he was going after her and let her know how he really felt.
  
  What can I say about the end, it had me in stitches just imagining Ray and Frank trying to stop Worm for going after Bob.
  
  Brilliant as usual.

  Author's response

  Ficwad does my head in too sometimes, the amount of times i've lost something when i respond to reviews. Thanks for bearing with it and posting a review.

• Deadlines

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2008-10-19

  loved it, i love frank hes soo adorable. I hope bob finds jill update soon!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i agree a Frank's a total cutey. I do quite like writing an angsty Frank though - so much fun.

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-10-20

  I knew that this would happen
  Update soonxx

  Author's response

  Oh no i hope it wasn't too predictable. Thanks for reviewing and i promise to update soon :)

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-20

  brilliant update!
  
  so sad when bob blanked her! silly boy! but that's real life isn't it, people fuck it up all the time!
  
  so glad he is going after her!!
  
  loved the little extras you got in there also. Framk is just so adorable!
  
  the description of a sleepy Gerard is too sweet! and his comment about Jill wearing Bob out! God I could feel her embarrassment!
  
  Frank tackling Worm is just so funny!
  
  can't wait to read more. Thanks very much!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much for reviewing and for making me laugh. I'm so pleased you liked it :)
  
  Gerard is bad - he mortified poor Jill. lol
  
  I'm so glad you liked the Frank and Worm bit. I was writing the Bob and Ray bit and i suddenly thought about how Bob would be able to get away without Worm going nuts. I then remembered the "I'm Not Okay" video and how Frank practically broke Brian's neck when he tackled him. So it all just came together and it worked - hurrah.
  
  I have to admit Frank's my fav so it's impossible not to write about the talented Mr Iero.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-20

  Framk would be Frank!
  
  oops!

  Author's response

  LOL - but Framk was so cute, that could be his halloween name.

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-10-20

  Hey Neve, I love the description you use when you write, I feel like I’m right there with them.
  
  I loved Jill watching him sleep but I wish they had just spoken to each other – so frustrating but just brilliant in terms of the story.
  
  I agree with everyone Frank is just too cute in this story. I loved how he just invited himself into Jill’s room lol. I did like the angry Frank. I love the extra bits you add in like Frank kicking Gerard out of his room to say goodbye and Gerard automatically holding Frank back and trying to calm him down. I had to laugh when Gerard got fed up with the shouting and just went back to his room.
  
  I love Ray, he keeps them all on the right path and he managed to get Bob to see he was fucking everything up. Lastly (cause I’ve got to stop before I write a novel) I loved the Worm bit – so friggin funny. Gerard saying "This band is going to shit” ha ha.
  
  Thank you – I loved this so much.
  

  Author's response

  wow, thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad there were so many bits that you enjoyed. I've just posted a new update which i hope you enjoy too.
  
  I really like the relationship between Gerard and Frank, so damn cute but i can imagine when they fall out it's mental.

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