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• Deadlines

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2008-10-27

  awwww cute bob and jill are together! That bit with brian was hilarious! update soon.

  Author's response

  Poor Brian, i bet he really cool with them all but i couldn't resist it.
  
  Thanks for reviewing :)

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-10-27

  I laughed SO hard when Ray had to explain to Brian about why Bob was not with them.
  
  I almost lost it when Ray found out the only reason he got the call was because the other guys had their phones on silent.
  
  Hilarious chapter! amazing writing, as always.
  
  Bob and Jill, cute as ever.
  
  Update soon, pretty please.
  
  

  Author's response

  I know, i was a bit cruel to Ray though but i'm glad you liked it. You can just imagine Ray being the responsible one - gotta love the man with the fro.
  
  thanks for reviewing :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-27

  Hi there neve,
  
  I loved this chapter from beginning to end. From Justin and Ruth checking in on the two of them to Bob promising not to go anywhere.
  
  And our little genius Ray was outsmarted by everyone else. Poor Ray having to explain to Brian what happened to Bob. I can picture Worm chuckling in the background thinking you screwed me now your turn.
  
  LOL!!!
  
  I loved Gwen too, especially when she said that wasn't something they expected from Bob but it was for Gerard. LOLO!!
  
  The whole chapter was great. I'm so looking forward to more. I just love this story and your writing.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i really did think this update was a bit of a stinker. I can't help but make Bob a honey, i think i might be making them too cute. oh well.
  
  You called Ray a little genius - that was just too cute. I loved that. They've outsmarted him this time but i'm sure he'll get his revenge - ha ha. I totally missed the Worm angle - bummer. lol.
  
  I'm glad you liked Gwen, i don't know how much she will be in it at this point but i kinda like her character. She puts Gerard right in his place.
  
  My next update is almost ready - ahh the pressure.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-28

  hey i loved this chapter too! so funny!
  
  i loved Ruth and Justin at the beginning! when Ruth thought about taking a photo, that was so great!
  
  and Ray answering the phone and all the others' phones were on silent! pure genius!
  
  and Gerard being a grumpy whinger and Frank being very Frank like!
  
  and of course Bob and Jill cuteness!
  
  brilliant!
  
  can't wait for more!

  Author's response

  Thank you and i'm so pleased i made you laugh. i love when people say i've caught a bit of the character in the way i've written them - so cool.
  
  I know i make Gerard a whinger, i feel kind of bad about that. I really appreciate the review.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-10-28

  I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!!!!!! FINALLY THEIR TOGEHERRRRRR>...MORE!

  Author's response

  Lol, glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing :) I promise to update soon.

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-10-28

  Lol, this was so funny Neve.
  
  I so agree with all the previous comments. Poor Ray and i could just picture the look on Gerard's face when Gwen said she would expect it from him - ha ha.
  
  I really liked the wee snippet of Jill waking up with Bob - so cute.

  Author's response

  You can just imagine the look on Gerard's face - hehe.
  
  Next update is mainly Bob and Jill which i hope you like.
  
  thanks for reviewing :)

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-10-28

  Hahahaha
  Its cute lolxx

  Author's response

  So pleased you like it, i've got such a boost from everyone's comments that i'm nearly finished my next update. Thank you.

• Deadlines

  (#) easykeys 2008-10-31

  That was so cute!!
  
  And Frank on the plane 'are we there yet' haha, could imagine that
  
  And ooooo Mikey suprised me there!
  
  Cant wait for more amazing stuff :)
  
  dondon xo.

  Author's response

  he he thanks Dondon, so glad you liked it. I'm just about to post my next update and well it's quite different and it's been so difficult to write - hope you like it.

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