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A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) nadialexandra 2009-10-11
2:32am
Fuck, Sas. I'm officially obsessed with and addicted to your writing. Like, really. If they had an app for this story on iTunes, I'd totally but it in a heartbeat.
1. Spencer is a douche. A sexy douche, yes, but still an asshole who totally deserved to be drained by Brendon. Or it could just be that I like the image of Brendon's lips, tongue and teeth all over Spencer's neck but Im thinking it must be both.
2. "Surprise? I don't want to throw a party for them, I want to kill them!" Best fucking line ever.
3. Patrick has an attitude? XD It's like "Okay, cool. You figured out who woke up first. Big whoop. Now who the fuck is the chick in your lap and why the fuck am I chained to an idiot who, most likely, is dreaming of y blood and salivating on my shoulder?I brought the fucker back, didn't I? He's alive... sorta. Jesus. What's a guy gotta do to get some fucking pig's blood around here?! I'm fucking Irish, man. Don't deny me drinks unless you want to be my next meal. Roar. Fear my sexiness." I may have gone a little overboard, butfuckit. :D
4. I still can't see Bilvy so evil! It's terrible, thinking f that adorable face ad wide eyes... Killing fosrsly awesome people.
5. I'm ficking tired. What is it there; 9:45 or sosmethin'? Shit. I wish the coffee shops here were open. And is it true that you guys get, like, an hour or two for lunch in Europe? 'cause all us fuckers get is 45 minutes- and that's just us lucky bastards in school. ~offtopic.
I'ma try to sleep now. This shit's got me tired. Thanks to you, I'll be having vampire-fawb dreams tonight. O:
xoxo
nadia
2:47am. Fuck.Author's response
Wow!! Thanks!! :D
Before I say anything else I gotta say I nearly fell off my chair when I read the part that you had Patrick say 'Fear my sexiness' - that was absolutely hysterical!!!! In fact, I want to use it in a story now - would you mind???
Yeah, totally with you on the 'evil Bilvy' front. I keep having to watch the 16 Candles video to see him 'in character' otherwise he'd just be... Oh I don't know... Jumping Brendon? Lol!!! Nah it's been done! (in stories I mean, not by him - well I don't actually know that... Hmmm stop writing Sas!!)
Yeah, Patrick with attitude - Pattitude!!!
I have a theme running through that vampires have extremes of emotions and have trouble with subtleties and nicities. Hence the attitude, he's just more likely to get to the point now. One of the reasons Pete always came across as surly.
Now, time difference is 5 hours at the mo, I think. Will go to 6 at the end of the month, maybe.
Lunch - don't know about schools, but in work we get an hour. The 2 hour thing is Spain coz it's too hot to work - not so here most of the time!!
We also get 4-5 weeks vacation in work in addition to public holidays. I know you guys get much less and I don't know how you stand for it!! I like my time off, it keeps me going :)
anyhoo, thanks so much for reviewing :) I'm so glad you're enjoying them. Btw - I finished 'I'm Just A Ghost...' while you were gone. Don't know if you want to have a read of how that went.
Take care
Sask x
ps - hope you actually got some good sleep in the end!A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) nadialexandra 2009-10-12
Haha. You can use the Fear My Sexiness bit; go ahead. 'cause he's just too sexy. I'd probably pull my hair back, jump into his lap, tilt my head and say "Have at it, Patrick. Much as you want. You'resosexyyyyy. -drool-"
As for Bilvy/Brendon. I'unno bout them, but I'm pretty sure he had a thing goin on between him and Gabe. Then Travie.
Pattitude! XD I'm tottally going to use that all the fucking time nao.
Five weeks? Shit. I don't even get that much in school. I get one week for Christmas, one in February, one in April, summer vacation and two days for Thanksgiving. Then regular off-days. Eh.
I'm Just A Ghost... I think I might've read the first chapter. I'ma go read it now.
xoxo
nadia (aka personspammingyourreviews)Author's response
spamawaym'dear!! :D
Good grief! When they join that label, is it written into their contracts that they all have to date each other?
I wonder if he knows he's sexy? You know? I often wonder stuff like that. I mean, I'm pretty sure (despite his self esteem issues) Pete knows he's gorgeous. But what about the others? Does Patrick even suspect that he's loved in 'that' way? Does he know that he's got sexy moves in the videos? And, as you say, on stage, but I've not seen them :'( (still crying) Or not?
It's a puzzler. You'll have to ask him next time you see him. Then you'll go back to the dressing room to discuss it further and bang you're in his lap!
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(#) charliexbrown 2009-10-12
I am loving evil Bilvy. Evil, clever, cunning, gorgeous Bilvy... -sigh- I can ]almost[ forgive him the Dirty plan. And the little Bill/Brendon pairing is nice! It makes me feel warm inside :3
Could there be a possible truce here? Bless Andy!... although he could just be too exhausted to deal with it properly. Ah well, we'll soon find out.
Crisis as dealed with as possible, I should be a more consistent reviewer from now on... you deserve reviews anyway! xAuthor's response
It shows how much he wants this if he's prepared to go in himself - rather even than teach Brendon how and send him. Young Bilvy wants to make sure he's making the right decision here...
A truce? It's a tricky one - Joe wants to believe, but may reject being able to purely because he thinks he just wants to! It may well come down to what Andy believes and how well he can sway the argument.
Like I said - I love getting your reviews, but I'm much more worried about the fact you've had a crisis. Hope things are ok for you now.
Hugs n stuff
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(#) nadialexandra 2009-10-12
OhshitIforgotaboutDirty! O:
Have you seen his MTV2 commercials? He does stupid shit... as usual.
And will do. -salute- I'll make a list of questions to also next time I meet them.
As for the Fueled By Ramen / Decaydance dating? Probably not. But I'm sure "By signing this contract, you are entitled to be sexy at one point or forever, sound either incredible and original or just like every other band out there, wear tighter jeans than your eleven year old fangirls do, take pictures of you and one or more of your labelmates in some sort of homosexual act to attract fangirls, defend Pete Wentz's reputation, accept the fact that you and Mr. Wentz will, at one point, be involved in some sort of overly-touchy situation, have fanfiction written about you and other men, and you must fondle at least one or more labelmate on stage. If you are married or homophobic, please be aware of what you are doing."
... Or something like that. :D
And now for an actual review!
Uhm ... Joe needs to stop thinking with his dick. I mean, not to sound harsh and Patrick-loving and all... but these are his friends. He knows how Pete is and he should know how Pete would react to being locked in a cage again. He should have known how Patrick would have freaked out if he saw Andy, after the ultimatum he gave him, picking up a stake and come close. It's like the human equivalent of the same thing with a gun... and seeing that person load a gun. You'd attack too, wouldn't you? All he wanted to do was save Andrea; fuck his friends. I think his 'from may have eaten his brain and all he has left to think with is... Yeah. :/ ~justathought.Author's response
Yes, that's the sort of thing I expect is written in when they sign! :D Now if only they'd sign my band!!
Story...
I think deep down, he does know all those things, but he's got to see that he knows it because it's true, not because he wants it to be. He's so busy trying not to let his heart rule his head that he's not even using his head!
So, you reckon the fro's just sent roots down and that's all there is?? Lol!! Brilliant!! :D
Thanks for the (many) reviews! :D
More soon complete with Patrick lovliness or lovely Patrickness - one of the two
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(#) Moonshyne 2009-10-16
Hi there Sas,
Poor Joe such tough decisions to make at least now with Andy awake and now Simon knowing he won't have to be feel so alone. I hope in the end they realize Patrick and Pete aren't bad.
I love the surliness of Pete though. Especially the line about being fed after the humans. Tell us what you're really thinking Pete.
Brandon and William make such a delicious evil duo. The mind control thing is scary. It gets them a way in. I love how William dangles tha carrot infront of Brandon's face. He's such a tease. LOL!!
I can't wait to see what happens next.Author's response
Hi Moonshyne!!
Neither Patrick nor Pete have got off on the right footing with Joe. They're all tired, but hopefully, they'll see sense.
William just won't stop will he? But he can't - he's like a gambling addict in a casino. Just one more plan and then it'll all work out... he hopes anyway.
Thanks, as always, for reviewing!
Sas x
ps - I LOVE writing 'surly Pete'!!A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-23
THROW THEM IN THE SUN! AHHH!
Just kidding :)
If anything, I'd go for Patrick. I'm not even joking, I totally wrote an FOB story... a while back.. and it was amazing.. and I probably STILL have it at my Gma's but.. I dunno :)
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