- A good start and with you going A/U with this will we see Dumbles as a Sith Lord with Tom as he unknowing 'apprentice'?
Oh and as Harry's going to be either ressurected or going to another reality I suggest keeping his friends close especially Hermione AND Luna!
Hope you update regularly as this does intrigue me!
Author's responseOK. Lessee...In order, no, and no.
Next up...not exactly, but something like that.
Sorry. Harmony this time, but Luna will be involved. More information will be available in chapters 2&3.
And thank you.
(#) jabarber69 2010-03-26Excellent story...and well written but if harry died? how's this going to progess? guess we'll just have to wait....but I sure wish you had written a little bit longer I definitely wanted to see dumbydork look on his face when he tried to present that fake will and was caught out by not only the goblins but also the DMLE!
Author's responseThe next chapter will answer your question. I intentionally left Dumbledore's reaction out of it because he will be relegated to the minor leagues.
Damn! I gave a hint.
As for the fake will, Dumbledore is pretty much the 'de facto' king. He can do what he likes. The goblins could take action, but only in the bank. The ministry is all but under Voldemort's control, now, so they won't lift a finger.
(#) austrian_shadow 2010-03-26Aloah,
I'm realy looking forward to read the next part of this story.... I realy don't know where you plan placing Harry time wise, but if you do it somewhere during the clone wars, let him interact friendly with Ashoka, Luna and Hermione.
Author's responseSorry, Shadow. It's only a 'sorta' crossover. It'll be a Harmony, and the rest you'll have to find out later.
- Like everybody else says, good start.. I think Fred should have whacked Snape several more times.. One stupefy might not be enough..lol
Author's responseThank you, Bjonn66.
Fred smacking him once, was enough to do the job. More than that would be overkill, and I need Snarlius alive...for now.
- Impressive spell work by Fred there!
Intersting Interesting Chapter.
Looking forward to more.
Author's responseI have to admit, I stole that idea from someone else, but I don't know who. It involves Dumbley, Igor and Minerva on a beach sipping mai-tais, while Dumbles rants about how one of his fellow teachers may have gone to the dark. Igor clubs him upside the head with a heavy ceramic stein and as Albie falls, he mutters "stupefy".
Anyone who reads this, if this is your idea, please contact me with the name and location of the fic, and I'll give you proper credit.
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