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Chapter 18
27 reviewsHarry saves the day, he and Hermione give Voldey a major headache, Nagini begins to worry about her master. Harry has a chat with Ollivander, Vernon and Petunia wallow in self-pity, Dudley gets in...
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JEDI POTTER
(#) vianca 2010-08-15
Finally, Ollivander whispered: “Uw huisaelf kunnen mijn goederen aan veiligheid nemen”. (Your house-elves may take my goods to safety.)
Sorry, but if you are going to use hollands, try to do it right, oke?
It's: "Uw huiselven mogen mijn goederen in veiligheid brengen".
Mogen = May
Brengen = take or rather: taking.
To savety = in veiligheid/naar veiligheid (I'm running to savety = Ik ren naar veiligheid, To savely store = In veiligheid opbergen)Author's response
As I said to Peanutz, i do not speak Dutch, only some German, so I went to Babelfish. I typed in the English version and that's what I got.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) Sasparilla 2010-09-05
“Uw huisaelf kunnen mijn goederen aan veiligheid nemen” i just saw this and as a dutchspeaker myself, i couldn't ignore this. change it to: "Uw huiself mag mijn goederen in veiligheid brengen." that's a lot better. (this is in chapter 18).
haven't read the rest yet, but after my exam tomorrow i'll be eager to continue!
keep on writing!Author's response
Thanks for the correction. I've edited it in.
Good luck on your exams.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) dreadme 2012-03-17
http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Garrick_Ollivander check this site for a name on ollivander the wand maker,and i'm enjoying the story so far keep up the good work!.Author's response
When I wrote these chapters, that information was not yet available. (‘Sides, I like Sagacious better.)
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) NobleK 2013-09-02
I've never heard of the term 'Naiquendi' being used for a high elf. Valar, perhaps, but not naiquendi; where do you get it from?Author's response
That should have been Laiquendi. It is in my master-copy.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) vanessa94us 2014-12-01
Garrick Ollivander
https://www.google.com/url?q=http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Garrick_Ollivander&sa=U&ei=yQB8VOfWHoOxsASDzYLQDQ&ved=0CBQQFjAA&sig2=Be05sBVZd3yi4wkPC4Z8yA&usg=AFQjCNEhmizCdpYrGftpd7RciDhc98BA_AJEDI POTTER
(#) potterfanchuck 2015-05-05
Good story. However, I believe that Ollivander's name is Garrick as per: http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Garrick_Ollivander and Pottermore.JEDI POTTER
(#) NobleK 2015-05-12
Where're you getting these High Elves from?! I've never heard of the term "Laiquendi" before?! baffled
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