- guilty wave I thought I reviewed this... Maybe I only thought I did. I know I read several things here before signing up, so this may have been one of them.
I have to disagree with the comment that at their age, they wouldn't be falling asleep together like that. I've done that often enough with guys I trust, and like you, I think that even if Atlanta hasn't quite clued in, she trusts Archie that much.
And I liked it because it wasn't all passionate declaration of love-ish. It seems much more natural.
Author's responseHaha, that's alright, I'm just glad you reviewed now. And thanks for agreeing with me, that's the main point I was trying to get out in their realationship was that they don't exactly 'LIKE-like' each other at that age, their trust in each other is that strong, no matter what happens. And yeah, I don't think Archie and Atlanta's actualy relationship will ever be all passionate and filled with the 'L' word. It is much more natural and develops out of their very strong friendship. Thanks for reviewing! ~Demenior
- You know, this is one of my favourite stories. Very subtle approach to the fact that he has a grade AAA crush on her and she is oblivious ;) It's one of the few things I don't like about Atlanta, apart from the fact that she's cocky and overcompetitive, she won't notice that big a crush on her, not even when it's just staring her in the face!! :o
Author's responsehaha, thank you. That's basically one of the main points I was going for with this story, that Archie and Atlanta CAN get together in fanfictions, like how a lot of peopl have them falling in love and everything, but in 'reality', they aren't. I was trying to show that we can still have nice moments with them, even if it's not an 'I LIKE-like you' ...I just don't believe in love at their/our age. Thank you very much for the review
(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-06I have loved this story ever since I have first read it! I never even wrote a review! Shame on me!
my crickets give me a slap
Oww! I deserved that! Loved this story, so cute, if anyone has read my bio, you can tell that I would sell my soul to get those two together! This story is just...so...great!
my crickets steal the key board
yes, very good, we are a/a fans too! loved it three times over!
(#) EilayAdnayVolieay 2006-07-27Aww this was a cute story, I liked it. I tried reading your Demons Within Me but had issues with it (as in, the story won't show for me, AHH!) so I checked out this one and it was very cute, awesome job.
The fact that Atlanta was confused about everything was definitely realistic considering her character, so that was good--- I've seen too many times people have just thrown them together instantly and went on and on about it. This was an enjoyable one-shot to read. =D
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