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Honey i'm home [Re-written slash]
11 reviews"When i get home, i always know he will be waiting for me.... making brownies?" Gerard's pov HOT FRERARD SEX for the new years!! Its my first slash so pleasee R&R xx :)
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Honey i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) emo-girl 2010-12-24
haha you did it!!! im proud of you baby!!! im proud of my little slut! i hope you wasn't thinking about me when you wrote this... getting a little horny esp. when you think of me right? haha anyway really good one shot, I'm still gonna sit you down and teach you thow to write the best pervy slash ever!!!
P.S. you forgot to mention that im your lover and we are getting married... how could you!!! i thought you loved me... :(Author's response
yes of course i was thinking of you when i did this :) haha thank you yeah u should help me out more :D
yes we are getting married and having children, and of course i love you xx :)Honey i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) Im_Not_Okay 2011-01-02
:) I like! Very hot, loved the melted chocolate bit :)
Awesome story!
xAuthor's response
aww thank you, though it does need re-doing,:D
thanks again x ^^Honey i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) urafreaklikeme 2011-02-20
super sexy!
i loved it :)
your an awesome writer!!
keep it up :D
heheAuthor's response
haha awww thank you, it's better now i have rewrittern it hehe
aww thanks i'm glad you think so :D
glad you liked it
xx coz
p.s. i loveee your username :pHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) sheXxie 2011-02-23
Oooh that was hot. I very much liked it. Mhm, loved it. Nice work! (^.^)-bAuthor's response
eeeeeep thank you soo much lol it's my first ever sex scene between the wounderfull boys hehe so i'm really glad you liked it :p
xx cozHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-04-08
mmmm...very hot xD i loved the sexy frerardness! :P really well written too, which was what made it so good :) loved this line- “Cocky.”
“Yeah but you like my cock,” he grinned.
haha, awesomeness xD really liked the last line too- so sweet! loved this oneshot, i'd rate it, but i'm too late :O but it's defo going in my faves :D can't get over how awesome your work is :) god, i really need to stop going on haha! keep the good work up!!
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. i've just updated "you'll never fit in much, kid"....xDAuthor's response
d'awwwww thank you sooo much that really does mean a lot :D
haha i know i'm suprised :0
yeah its my first slash so i was a bit iffy about it but i'm over the mooooooon that you love it :p
may write some more XD
and god no wayyy my work is nothing compared to yours the way you explain things and set the mood is just briiliant and i love your enthusiasm in reviews thereee soooo nice
so thanks a bunch :D
oh lol i tried reading that last night but my friend beth (patrick is the sex) i.e. maniac perv kept me up and when i tried i fell asleep :( lol sowwy but i will read it tonight i always love reading fanfcition on the evening :)
xx coz
ohh and my "happiness or misery?" will be up tonight :DHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) Rhiannabear 2011-04-12
Wow that was HOT.
haha "Cocky." That made ma laugh.
You're really good and you're definatly going in my favourites. I would have definatly rated you but I'm too late as well.
Love it!
Rhianna xx :o)Author's response
hehe awww thanks soo much it really means a lot >.<
hehe tar it was my first slash so i'm really happy you like it :)
awww thats so sweet awww thanks again hehe
your awesome
choawwi chaz xxHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) fire_girl96 2011-05-01
Amazing I've always had a weird fetish for eating things off peopleAuthor's response
haha thanks :]
ohhh okay then lol
tanks for reviewing it means a lot as this is my first ever slash hehe
i'm glad you enjoyedHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) ONotz 2011-05-31
I wonder what the other 3 guys think they are doing! ;)Author's response
hehe well lets put it thsi way, they can't be doing anything near esxciting as what frank and gee are doing lol
wink wink hehe
thanks for reviewing :]
chazom
xxHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) kirrahdiviney 2011-08-09
that was hot AS! you're VERY good at this! i LOVE your writing so much! keep up the AMAZING work :3
- kirrah xxAuthor's response
hehe awwww thank youuu ^.^ well it's my first so i'm really glad you like it, i hope to be improving with the sex scenes though XD
be sure to check out my 'Happiness or Misery?' if you havn't. It's doing good and there will be a saucy scene soon hehe
thanks again
chazom
xxHoney i'm home [Re-written slash]
(#) ParanoiaDestroyah 2011-08-25
Holy crimson balls, batman!
This is spectacular.
Excellent job! :DAuthor's response
hahahah XD lol
you made me laugh hehe thank you soo sooo much :) i'm glad you liked it, i shall do another sexy one-shot :p
chazom
xx
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