- haha you did it!!! im proud of you baby!!! im proud of my little slut! i hope you wasn't thinking about me when you wrote this... getting a little horny esp. when you think of me right? haha anyway really good one shot, I'm still gonna sit you down and teach you thow to write the best pervy slash ever!!!
P.S. you forgot to mention that im your lover and we are getting married... how could you!!! i thought you loved me... :(
Author's responseyes of course i was thinking of you when i did this :) haha thank you yeah u should help me out more :D
yes we are getting married and having children, and of course i love you xx :)
(#) urafreaklikeme 2011-02-20super sexy!
i loved it :)
your an awesome writer!!
keep it up :D
Author's responsehaha awww thank you, it's better now i have rewrittern it hehe
aww thanks i'm glad you think so :D
glad you liked it
p.s. i loveee your username :p
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-04-08mmmm...very hot xD i loved the sexy frerardness! :P really well written too, which was what made it so good :) loved this line- “Cocky.”
“Yeah but you like my cock,” he grinned.
haha, awesomeness xD really liked the last line too- so sweet! loved this oneshot, i'd rate it, but i'm too late :O but it's defo going in my faves :D can't get over how awesome your work is :) god, i really need to stop going on haha! keep the good work up!!
p.s. i've just updated "you'll never fit in much, kid"....xD
Author's responsed'awwwww thank you sooo much that really does mean a lot :D
haha i know i'm suprised :0
yeah its my first slash so i was a bit iffy about it but i'm over the mooooooon that you love it :p
may write some more XD
and god no wayyy my work is nothing compared to yours the way you explain things and set the mood is just briiliant and i love your enthusiasm in reviews thereee soooo nice
so thanks a bunch :D
oh lol i tried reading that last night but my friend beth (patrick is the sex) i.e. maniac perv kept me up and when i tried i fell asleep :( lol sowwy but i will read it tonight i always love reading fanfcition on the evening :)
ohh and my "happiness or misery?" will be up tonight :D
(#) Rhiannabear 2011-04-12Wow that was HOT.
haha "Cocky." That made ma laugh.
You're really good and you're definatly going in my favourites. I would have definatly rated you but I'm too late as well.
Rhianna xx :o)
Author's responsehehe awww thanks soo much it really means a lot >.<
hehe tar it was my first slash so i'm really happy you like it :)
awww thats so sweet awww thanks again hehe
choawwi chaz xx
(#) kirrahdiviney 2011-08-09that was hot AS! you're VERY good at this! i LOVE your writing so much! keep up the AMAZING work :3
- kirrah xx
Author's responsehehe awwww thank youuu ^.^ well it's my first so i'm really glad you like it, i hope to be improving with the sex scenes though XD
be sure to check out my 'Happiness or Misery?' if you havn't. It's doing good and there will be a saucy scene soon hehe
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