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• JEDI POTTER

  (#) kurotatsu72 2011-12-30

  Just rereading this for the nth time and realized that they had an easy answer for Remus' transformations sitting right in the front hall: On the full moon, chuck him in a stasis tank for the night. Since time isn't passing in the tank, no transformation, hence no pain.
  
  Love the story, can't wait for the next bit.

  Author's response

  Heya kurotatsu,
  I’m thrilled you liked the story so much you’ve read it again (and again). (Blushes)
  I suppose it would work, but it woul;d only be a baqndaid measure. Also, I wonder if interrupting the cycles like that wouldn’t sause more trouble.
  It’s a thought, though.
  This story is done. There will be others, though.
  Alorkin

• JEDI POTTER

  (#) goku90504 2012-01-02

  cool story so far but one mistake you make over an over an over again
  
  it's drawer not draw
  draw is not a piece of furniture it's an action
  drawer is a piece of furniture used for storage

  Author's response

  Heya goku,
  “America and Britain, two countries forever separated by a common language.”
  From what I’ve read, in British English, (mostly in Anne McCaffrey’s stories, although it is mentioned by Burke, Carroll, EE Smith, Melville, TS Eliot, and TE Lawrence,) a dresser is a ‘press’ and a drawer is a draw.
  Alorkin

• JEDI POTTER

  (#) NobleK 2013-09-03

  W.T.F is with the hot pink tourmaline? I've done some basic geology - up to sophomore level - and NEVER heard of it being hot pink!!

  Author's response

  Depending on the impurities, tourmaline can be any color from greenish brown to a dark red. I studied this very carefully and selected the stone most suitable for Tonks’ lightsaber. If you insist, just imagine she used impurities to change the color. That’s how I had Ron alter his from Citrine to ‘Chudley orange’. By the way, neither rainbow quartz nor tourmaline is suitable for lasers.
  
  Alorkin

• JEDI POTTER

  (#) sylvelle 2015-01-31

  I understand the reasoning for not telling Neville, I just hope you can keep Neville from breaking off with Harry you know.

• JEDI POTTER

  (#) Simianpower 2015-07-13

  I hate to say this, but I'm really bored. The story started out well, but it's become a Standard Training Fic. Dumbledore's a moron who's outthought on every front. Voldemort's a moron who repeatedly gets addicted to drugs. Everyone's an idiot except Our Black Hole Sue Hero, who can do no wrong and trains for a year. That's all well and good, but it's boring as hell to read. I kept hoping for the story to go somewhere other than "and then they trained for another week, and two more people made lightsabers", but that's really all there is to the story. Hermione is Harry's yes-girl and fuck-puppet, and everyone else are just hollow shadows. There's no characters worth reading about in this, no conflict, no actual danger to any named hero. It's a boring self-insert. I really like Star Wars/Potter crossovers, with Darth Marrs and Tsu Doh Nimh having the best I've seen so far. But this one... as much as I wanted to like it, I haven't, and I don't even care how Harry wins, because it won't be an epic fight when it took 20+ chapters of training to get there.

• JEDI POTTER

  (#) Holyblade8 2018-11-18

  The tags listed for the main story do not include rape. For that I hope you suffer in some way. Rape is not entertainment. Those who use it as such are sick bastards. There are many people who don’t want to or can not deal with such things and for you to put it in there with graphic detail and with no flag warning? Scum! There was no reason to go into such detail you sick pervert.
  
  On a side note you are starting to have Harry do some pretty stupid things to drive plot forward. Dumbing down your characters to force plot points is not good writing. For that matter, I understand this is a Harry centric story but you have hermione as a useless bedwarming character. She has contributed nothing except sex. So much for her brains.
  
  Your increasingly poor decisions are ruining this. As it is, I pray karma kicks your ass.

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