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JEDI POTTER
(#) NobleK 2013-09-04
"Eleven years later, my own daughter was born, (C-section, due to a placenta previa…a fascinating surgery, I must say!) The doctor handed her to me and I held her down for my Pauline to see, and I swear, the little monster grinned at me just before she shit in my hands!" I'm sure she was and I'm equally sure you had done something to deserve it; after all in her eyes it's a known fact, we're men, therefore we're pigs!! ;-PAuthor's response
Yeah, Pauline said something like that, too.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) ranmasaotome123 2013-10-16
This is god damned awesome I can't wait to see what else you can write. Please continue to write up these amazing fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
Heya ranmasaotome,
I don’t’ think I’veever had such a…virulent praise before. Jedi was the result of more than two years of research, writing and posting, and is one of the hardest things I’ve ever done.
I will endevour to continue to write as long as I have the ability.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) RbdSqrl 2014-04-12
At first I was very skeptical of a Harry Potter Star Wars cross. In fact I avoided reading it for quite along time.
That was a mistake. This was a strange combination of worlds, but I found that once I accepted the idea of magical Jedi it was very enjoyable. I have to say the writing did pound some stuff into the ground (Harry's story about his treatment at the hands of his relatives was repeated way to much). However everything else was fantastic. I would have to recommend this to anyone who is not a die hard cannon cop. This story works! Is well written, and has good explanations that give a plausible reasons for what is going on in the story.
Job well done.JEDI POTTER
(#) thro 2014-07-30
It was an enjoyable story. The idea was a good one but execution wasn't perfect. You rambled on about how evil Albus was a bit too much, had Harry tell his life story and hear how much everyone was enraged much too often and didn't make the Death Eaters or Voldemort formidable enemies.
I don't understand why Ron was held in reverence at the end when he acted stupidly and exactly not like a Jedi. I also don't believe that a Ron Luna coupling would have ever worked and I simply don't understand why you had them married and pregnant.
However it had lightsabres.JEDI POTTER
(#) hpfanscs 2014-08-24
I usually don't read crossovers but this one intrigued me. I am glad I did. This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. Thanks for all your hard work.JEDI POTTER
(#) smargden_2005 2014-11-06
Thank you for the BIG and good story. All in all very good.
As I must tgake it into my Word - for reading - its same 1300 + pages,. Thank you
/SmargdenJEDI POTTER
(#) sylvelle 2015-02-02
Great story, I enjoyed it. I think is the first SW/P crossover I followed to the end. Don't think Harry was Harrison or Harold or anything but just Harry. So I gnashed my teeth when I read it but a small price to pay for the chance to read this great story.
Thanks
TriciaJEDI POTTER
(#) StewofJason 2015-02-21
Must say, best HP starwars cross over I've read so far, and surprisingly only the second where Harry remained a good guy; in almost all of them he seems to become a sith or close to.
I will say that I didn't much care for Harry's premature death, especially as they did have the philosopher's stone (and if I recall right it was never said it was destroyed); I would have had him live to the same age as his wive's at the very least.
Nice twist in Ron's death; or at least I felt it was a twist, everything seemed to be pointing towards him becoming a Sith in my opinion.JEDI POTTER
(#) NobleK 2015-05-12
Judging by my review dated 2013-09-04, this is my second(?) reading. You sir, may give yourself a well deserved pat on the back. Oh, and word of advice; don't volunteer to deliver any more babies unless it's a life-or-death situation; they seem to like using you as a potty!! EVIL GRINJEDI POTTER
(#) Thewhiterosee 2015-09-14
Loved this story. Didn't see the ending coming with Luna but I did sort of peice together what would happen to Ron. The epilogue had me in tears. Was a great story. Forgot about him saying he wouldn't live passed 60. Great story. A deffenat top 5 in all my fan fictions I've ever read.
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